Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Bill. Short and sweet, but a terrific simple acrostic that describes the mole. Each line clearly gives the reader the purpose of this animal. All poem is a good addition to your collection. Marilyn

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017

Thanks, Marilyn, for the great review. Bill

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Do you never run out of ideas like the rest of us?

A good acrostic about the mole, with descriptions that are spot on. Poor little guys can be a nuisance, but they're only doing what they were made for. 8-)

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017

Thanks, da

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend you have described the mole in this short piece using good strong descriptive phrases I enjoyed well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017

Thanks, Mrs P

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Add to that, destroyer of lawns. I tried to drown one of those little suckers, imagine my surprise when I saw him actually piling dirt back into the hole he had dug to protect himself from the water I was aiming at him. Arghh!!!!

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017

Lawn Lord

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Guten Tag, I enjoyed the acrostic format of this one Bill. You have described the little critter effectively and gave him the proper action his species needs. Nice! xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017

Thanks, kiwi

Comment from Possummagic

Excellent

Creatively written as always. Do you ever run out of ideas? Yesterday I had writers block and today all it took was a word on the news that got my creative juices running again. Good luck.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017

Thanks, PM

reply by Possummagic on 15-Aug-2017

You are welcome.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a very good acrostic using the word mole. You used very good descriptive wording that described them very well. Very good imagery with your wording. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Bill.

Very nicely done, mate. I really like this form and actually wrote one once... it took me ages lol.

Very nice portrayal of the mole... I've never seen one as we don't have them, here, or in Australia.

Great job.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017

Thanks, Fez

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"Holy Moley Batman!"
"Seems to me that there's a Rat in The Bat...
"House!"
'More like a Mole, Robin!"
"Look!"
"Over There!"
"Look what that creature did to by dirt floor!
LOL!
Dr. Ricky 1024 and good luck with this."
s

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017

Thanks, Ricky, for giving this a look.