Merry-go-round.
A Nonet, see foot note.7 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
It looked to me as if your syllable count was perfect, Anonymous Poet
As for the content of your nonet, I cannot ride anything that spins around.
Rollercoasters, Ferris Wheels, even the Whip 'n' Whirl I can handle.
But a merry go round, or those little lady bug things with a steering wheel looking device you turn to make it spin faster...NO WAY! I'll upchuck my cookies every time.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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It looked to me as if your syllable count was perfect, Anonymous Poet
As for the content of your nonet, I cannot ride anything that spins around.
Rollercoasters, Ferris Wheels, even the Whip 'n' Whirl I can handle.
But a merry go round, or those little lady bug things with a steering wheel looking device you turn to make it spin faster...NO WAY! I'll upchuck my cookies every time.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anon. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well penned Nonet Poem for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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This is a very well penned Nonet Poem for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anon. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Irish Rain
I just LOVE this picture!! What a great nonet for this contest. I like Merry-go-rounds, one of the few rides I do like!! Good luck, blessings...
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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I just LOVE this picture!! What a great nonet for this contest. I like Merry-go-rounds, one of the few rides I do like!! Good luck, blessings...
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anon. Have a lovely week.
Comment from LIJ Red
Define Top, I'm out of my dialect,here. No matter. it's true that even sensitive folks like the merry go round, while avoiding the tilt-a-whirl and such. I think you have the counts right.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Define Top, I'm out of my dialect,here. No matter. it's true that even sensitive folks like the merry go round, while avoiding the tilt-a-whirl and such. I think you have the counts right.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anon. Have a lovely week.
Comment from nbonner
Very good nonet poem. I used to love merry-go-rounds as a kid but you can't seem to find them at parks these days. I wish they were still around for my granddaughter to experience. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Very good nonet poem. I used to love merry-go-rounds as a kid but you can't seem to find them at parks these days. I wish they were still around for my granddaughter to experience. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anon. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A well-written Nonet. The merry-go-round is the most favored ride by smaller children.
One syllable count midtake in fourth line.
No dizz'ness at all either (7 instead of 6)
No dizziness either (6)
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017
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A well-written Nonet. The merry-go-round is the most favored ride by smaller children.
One syllable count midtake in fourth line.
No dizz'ness at all either (7 instead of 6)
No dizziness either (6)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from dmt1967
I like the theme, merry-go-round but the style of poem does not work for me. It Reads like a memory running away but is too stilted to be a thought. It is well written, hence the five. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017
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I like the theme, merry-go-round but the style of poem does not work for me. It Reads like a memory running away but is too stilted to be a thought. It is well written, hence the five. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.