Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting cinquain poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017

Thanks, Teri.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Clearly one without sight, who is in pursuit of sustenance can do much harm. When your body hurts, you forget about some problems, but when your stomach hurts, from hunger, you can and will forget about everything.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017

I hit a mole with my lawn mower. He didn't shoot out so he must be painted inside the mower deck. Great.

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

A fantastic cinquain Bill, it is nicely Stitched together with a last line that is sublime.
Reply enjoy these animal poems of yours
Loved it..
Mitchell..

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017

Thank you, Mitchell

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks how the small insectivorous mammal acts in diversity on and under surface and chase earthworms and grubs blindly and lives like a pest; I liked.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017

Thanks, ALD

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend moles indeed can be a pest ruining gardens this reads very well you have done well to use this form 2/4/6/8/2 well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017

Thanks, Mrs P

Comment from damommy

Excellent

But consider how they aerate the soil. lol

Never had a problem with moles. But I hear they are a real pest. Poor little guys can't see, but still they manage.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017

Moles are murder in my yard. My dog used to have fun digging them up, she has gone to her reward. My reward is a mole invasion.

reply by damommy on 14-Aug-2017

LOL

Comment from donforclearn

Excellent

This poem is well written. It has an excellent image of a mole. However, we have to remember that all things contribute to this world, otherwise they would not have evolved. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017

Thanks, Don, for reviewing.

Comment from luther maddox

Average

I was waiting to read more, good thoughts about a mole, I was hoping more to it
the essential meaning as you began was poignant. Often brief poems get to the point rather than long drawn out poems, but this one really cut to the chase. More like the philosophical thoughts of cowboys riding off into the sunset, yes, this mole came a left us much too quickly.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017

T.....h.....a.......n.......k......s......, LM, for reviewing.

reply by luther maddox on 14-Aug-2017