The Joker
Is it really funny??5 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
I don't usually get the punch line, so I think I don't have to worry about it unless the jokes are very obvious. Otherwise they go right over my head. I don't think I'd enjoy a comedy club for that reason. Still your piece is well written and illustrated. Marilyn
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
I don't usually get the punch line, so I think I don't have to worry about it unless the jokes are very obvious. Otherwise they go right over my head. I don't think I'd enjoy a comedy club for that reason. Still your piece is well written and illustrated. Marilyn
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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thanks for reviewing.
Comment from smileycloud
great story
perfect rhyme
meets prompt with ease
love the presentation
very good message
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
great story
perfect rhyme
meets prompt with ease
love the presentation
very good message
have a smiley day
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Thanks for tjhe kind review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks an advice to the readers that we should not tolerate any sort of indecency in expression and instantly must condemn such an act out of place and it is good; I liked.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
This speaks an advice to the readers that we should not tolerate any sort of indecency in expression and instantly must condemn such an act out of place and it is good; I liked.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
hello Poet. I am so glad I do not know how to tell a joke! Your Nonet is in excellent format and your message is clear. No one has to be a part of something distasteful to them. I believed the message and the write. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
hello Poet. I am so glad I do not know how to tell a joke! Your Nonet is in excellent format and your message is clear. No one has to be a part of something distasteful to them. I believed the message and the write. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
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Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is an interesting Nonet poem contest entry. All syllables are in check and the content paints a picture of sticking up and having a say to stop negative jokes or comments that are distasteful or negative. You've done well to add some rhyme into this restricting format. Well done and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
This is an interesting Nonet poem contest entry. All syllables are in check and the content paints a picture of sticking up and having a say to stop negative jokes or comments that are distasteful or negative. You've done well to add some rhyme into this restricting format. Well done and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
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Thanks for the kind review.