Day at the Pond
A nonet7 total reviews
Comment from kathleenspalding
Excellent and entertaining nonet poem flows well and paints a vivid and humorous mental picture. Perfect use of artwork and colors. Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
Excellent and entertaining nonet poem flows well and paints a vivid and humorous mental picture. Perfect use of artwork and colors. Well done!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Thank you!
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You're welcome
Comment from Irish Rain
What a truly delightful entry in this contest!! I love the rainbow bubbles blown by the kissing Koi!! This is just pure enchanting fun!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
What a truly delightful entry in this contest!! I love the rainbow bubbles blown by the kissing Koi!! This is just pure enchanting fun!! Blessings...
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thank you for enjoying my vision!
Comment from humpwhistle
A very appealing flight of fancy.
You do a very nice job of describing
the various denizens of pond society.
Well done.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
A very appealing flight of fancy.
You do a very nice job of describing
the various denizens of pond society.
Well done.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your kind consideration.
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your nonet poem contest entry. Your words depict a lovely time on the pond, and your chosen artwork is the perfect compliment. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
thank you for sharing your nonet poem contest entry. Your words depict a lovely time on the pond, and your chosen artwork is the perfect compliment. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Appreciate the positive feedback!
Comment from RodG
I like how you have used your nature "camera" to make us see first the lily, pads, then the koi, and finally the frog who seems to speak to us. A nice You Tube video with words.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
I like how you have used your nature "camera" to make us see first the lily, pads, then the koi, and finally the frog who seems to speak to us. A nice You Tube video with words.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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I'm strictly Old School and seldom use You Tube. But glad I was able to paint with my words a video!
Comment from Poetic Friend
Wow, this is so picturesque! I saw every move of that dragonfly and bullfrog. The you painted the images so well with your words.
The nonet also gave me a slight adrenaline rush when that dragonfly crossed the path of the bullfrog.
This nonet is well-executed.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
Wow, this is so picturesque! I saw every move of that dragonfly and bullfrog. The you painted the images so well with your words.
The nonet also gave me a slight adrenaline rush when that dragonfly crossed the path of the bullfrog.
This nonet is well-executed.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Appreciate your kind and insightful review!
Comment from nbonner
Good imagery used in this poem. I can actually see the dragon fly's flying over the bullfrog like I was there. Thank you for sharing and good luck on the contest
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
Good imagery used in this poem. I can actually see the dragon fly's flying over the bullfrog like I was there. Thank you for sharing and good luck on the contest
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the positive feedback!