The Crossword Puzzle
Joke into a Story contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This story from a joke had a lot of great puns in it that you mixed so well together in this hilarious comedy of errors that was right up there with Benny Hill.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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This story from a joke had a lot of great puns in it that you mixed so well together in this hilarious comedy of errors that was right up there with Benny Hill.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Bill. Yeah, I had Benny Hill running around in my head as I was writing this ridiculous piece, lol. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great night.
Comment from smileycloud
extremely good imagination
loads of humour injected into this piece
well written story with a whole lot of non-stop action
the imagery is fine and the characterisation is great
I felt like I was watching a Jerry Lewis movie or an English Carry On movie
good entry
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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extremely good imagination
loads of humour injected into this piece
well written story with a whole lot of non-stop action
the imagery is fine and the characterisation is great
I felt like I was watching a Jerry Lewis movie or an English Carry On movie
good entry
have a smiley day
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Smiley C. Yeah, whenever I write stories rather than poetry, I like to pack it with action. Just how I like my movies, lol. I don't write too many stories because I'm not too good at filling in the slower parts. When I saw this contest I got this silly idea and just ran with it. Ha. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness. I hope you have a wonderful day as well.
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Comment from bmethner
This definitely made me laugh. The corner of most humor is usually misunderstanding. Likewise in life all the anger and drama and even violence centers around misunderstandings. It does help when we can laugh about it as your story shows. Great message driven by a funny story. Totally enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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This definitely made me laugh. The corner of most humor is usually misunderstanding. Likewise in life all the anger and drama and even violence centers around misunderstandings. It does help when we can laugh about it as your story shows. Great message driven by a funny story. Totally enjoyed it.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the great review, bmethner. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle or two out of this silly thing. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
Maybe slightly overworked but you did manage to sequence at interesting junctures.
Those women you encountered seemed to have a lot of energy and something of an ultra sensitivity to stupidity. Anyway you did make me giggle in places.
Warmly,
Juliette
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Maybe slightly overworked but you did manage to sequence at interesting junctures.
Those women you encountered seemed to have a lot of energy and something of an ultra sensitivity to stupidity. Anyway you did make me giggle in places.
Warmly,
Juliette
Comment Written 12-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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That's all I was going for, a chuckle or two here and there. Thank you for the great review, Juliette. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.