Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Shirley, I used to love to watch my cat stalk things...just not live things...LOL...love your poem sweet girl...and love your picture...very nicely written...love ya you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi Linda,
I've missed your sweet reviews.
I appreciate your comments.
I hope all is well with you and yours.
:-) Shirley

reply by l.raven on 12-Aug-2017

all is well my sweet friend...and you are always so welcome...smiling back at ya...love xxoo

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Exceptional

The first and last lines are the same Shirley. LOL This is so true. We don't have a cat now, but I think there are a couple of feral ones hunting out there. Good job on this my friend.
Nancy

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi Nancy,
Thank you for such a supportive review.
It is lovely to know your effort is appreciated.
I really like the fact that the start and end lines for this style are exactly the same.
I think it adds depth of meaning to the rest of the poem.
:-) Shirley

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Rictameter. A great subject choice. The cat lurking in the grass. Luckily, the wren spot him in time to save their own lives for the moment.

crouhes down low in the grass(7 syllables instead of 6)

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Thank you Sandra.
:-) Shirley

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Hi
Really enjoyed this Rictameter poem, which flowed effortlessly,
lovely rhythm and lines throughout, stitched fantastically well.
I particularly enjoyed the imagery shown which paints such a vivid picture in the mind of this cat stalking the wrens...an excellent poem, that was a pleasure to read.
Mitchell.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Thank you for your review.
I appreciate your time.
:-) Shirley