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Comment from BeasPeas
"Death on the flyways"--good pun there. Also "windshields become graveyards." I guess no one likes flies and yet we have so many of them. Food for frogs and such. Another good addition to your Fly series. Marilyn
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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"Death on the flyways"--good pun there. Also "windshields become graveyards." I guess no one likes flies and yet we have so many of them. Food for frogs and such. Another good addition to your Fly series. Marilyn
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Thank you, Marilyn, for the nice review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
Back to front and everything in between, flies get no break, nor do they deserve one. I once bought a zapper and I used to enjoy hearing the various bugs getting zapped as they foolishly few into it. My own mother accused me of persecuting the poor bugs. I laughed maniacally, my mother shook her head and began to wonder if I had been switched at birth.
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Back to front and everything in between, flies get no break, nor do they deserve one. I once bought a zapper and I used to enjoy hearing the various bugs getting zapped as they foolishly few into it. My own mother accused me of persecuting the poor bugs. I laughed maniacally, my mother shook her head and began to wonder if I had been switched at birth.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Just calm down
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Too late. Maybe I was switched Nah, no way.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend kamikaze flies they do end up splattered on the windows of cars I wonder what there last thought is well done regards Jill
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Yes my friend kamikaze flies they do end up splattered on the windows of cars I wonder what there last thought is well done regards Jill
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Jill, for the kind review.
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
That last line Bill.....what's the last thing through a fly's brain.......brilliant, an excellent way to complete a wonderful write, really enjoyed this Fly world offering.
Have a great day
Mitchell
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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That last line Bill.....what's the last thing through a fly's brain.......brilliant, an excellent way to complete a wonderful write, really enjoyed this Fly world offering.
Have a great day
Mitchell
Comment Written 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Mitchell, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hey Bill, Well let me tell you, if a dang fly is anywhere near me in a car or windshield or wherever, the last thing that fly is gonna remember is NOTHING! if I have my way of it and I'm not even vicious...another great write. xoxo deborah
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Hey Bill, Well let me tell you, if a dang fly is anywhere near me in a car or windshield or wherever, the last thing that fly is gonna remember is NOTHING! if I have my way of it and I'm not even vicious...another great write. xoxo deborah
Comment Written 08-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Thanks, kiwi
Comment from damommy
I'm not answering that even though I know. hahahaha
Summer travel is the time when you can't see out the windshield for all the dead bugs. They're not all flies, either, darn it.
Very cute. Make me chortle.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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I'm not answering that even though I know. hahahaha
Summer travel is the time when you can't see out the windshield for all the dead bugs. They're not all flies, either, darn it.
Very cute. Make me chortle.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Thanks, da.. That fly joke is funny though; Right?
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Very funny!
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Did anyone answer the riddle? lol
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That joke is really only known by connoisseurs like us.
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8-)
Comment from Maurice Merritt
Often I read things that make me laugh but this peace intrigued me in a different funny way. It left a question on who is the fly ? You can take it as life is the highway we are the flies .
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Often I read things that make me laugh but this peace intrigued me in a different funny way. It left a question on who is the fly ? You can take it as life is the highway we are the flies .
Comment Written 08-Aug-2017
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Thanks, MM
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. You present an interesting thought in this short poem I do wonder what a fly's last thought is before they hit the windshield. LOL Great and creative writing.
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Excellent. You present an interesting thought in this short poem I do wonder what a fly's last thought is before they hit the windshield. LOL Great and creative writing.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2017
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Thanks, PBB