Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is an excellent poem on the wantonness of Warren and the wicked wardrobe-less women he wanted. Good job here with every word started with the "W." Alliteration is great. Much luck in the contest with this terrific entry. Marilyn

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2017

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Wonderful, witty poem that I truly enjoyed. Wayne seems like a fun loving interesting person. Your writing should do well in the contest. I love alliteration.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017

Thank you for the compliments, and for what you said about Wayne, Judy. I did enjoy working with him. He seemed just right to alliterate.

Comment from marybell1

Exceptional

I really enjoyed your allegation poem "Worrying about Warren". You told a wonderful story all in "W's", and kept to a good story line as required. Though I noticed you repeated 'when' in line 5. You may wish to remove this before judging time.
All the best
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017

Thank you for your terrific review, and eagle eye! I immediately corrected may careless mistake, in the hope that no one else would notice it.

For some reason that concerns me now, I was unable to reply to you in the usual way (this message is via the 'find a member' option, and I don't know if you can tell the difference.) All but one of my reviews disappeared. I remembered your outstanding one, and your name, but I won't be able to reply to the others unless Tom can restore the missing messages.

C'est la vie.

reply by marybell1 on 08-Aug-2017

Thank you. I think you used the right reply method. (my computer skills are still in the beginner class) and you are most welcome.
Marybell1.