Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Hahahaha. Loved this one with the personalization of the flies. And believe me, I did rejoice at the end as the ones at my house seem to be starting to like the flykilling spray! I expect them to start coming back the size of dogs invigorated by it-LOL.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017

Thanks, FB

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Yay! Let's hear it for the fog that Raided the swarm down by French bread farm. For it caused deadly harm to that stinking swarm.
Hopefully
there will no longer be
flies to bother me
as I try to sip my tea
in peace.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017

Thanks, nomi

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

This one gave me quite a buzz. Inventive rhyming, cheerful good humour in the face of invading flies, and a pleasant rhythm make this an entertaining tale to read aloud.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017

Thanks, Tony, for the nice review. Bill

Comment from Possummagic

Excellent

Another great poem, this time about the disgustingly unhygienic fly. I loved the comic imagery putting together the whole package. It was humerous but I felt a bit sick at the word phlegm. I can take all bodily fluids but phlegm leaves me gagging!

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017

Thanks, PM, and sorry. Bill

reply by Possummagic on 07-Aug-2017

Haha that's ok. Just took me back to my nursing days. Junior nurse gagging all the way to the pan-backs with a sputum mug....... Charge nurse asks me what's wrong?............" nothing" says I .. gagging along! Lol

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the funny tale of fly, once upon a time flies heard terrible tales of the fatal fog at Frenchbread Farm, at last the stinky flies found deed there; I liked.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017

Thanks, ALD

Comment from damommy

Excellent

I love "sharkasses." Great word to come up with. And I liked that the new guys will salute the dead ones with a respectful buzz. 8-)

This one made me laugh out loud. lol

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017

Thanks, da, for the great review. Bill

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hi Bill
looks like I should go and take a look at your past poems of Fly World because I found my self giggling with your clever Humor

Gert

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017

Thanks, Gert

reply by Gert sherwood on 06-Aug-2017

You are welcome Bill
Gert

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Excellent. This writing of yours provided my much needed daily chuckle. I truly enjoyed the humor in the ending of your poem. It is well-written and fun to read.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017

Thanks, PBB, for the nice review. Bill