The Lost Boy Revisited
Healing through expression41 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
in it's state of mind,(its--no apostrophe)
he knows he'll ever find (never)
Wow, what a very sad and powerful poem this is. Excellent imagery and wording and so full of emotional pain,I have had a few very serious episodes of depression and the feelings in this poem mirror the hopelessness and pain I felt at that time. Beautifully written, my friend~Debbie
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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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in it's state of mind,(its--no apostrophe)
he knows he'll ever find (never)
Wow, what a very sad and powerful poem this is. Excellent imagery and wording and so full of emotional pain,I have had a few very serious episodes of depression and the feelings in this poem mirror the hopelessness and pain I felt at that time. Beautifully written, my friend~Debbie
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Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for the spag check, and your comments are greatly appreciated. Some things never go away, but thankfully they do fade with time.
Curt
