Unimaginable Horror
And Then The Elevator Door Opened contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Auto-Manic
Yup, know how you feel. Good imagery, kept your sentences short and tight which got me through to the end, and the twist was great; a guy going bonkers at a poetry convention, yes, there should be more of that, don't you think? Overall a good read.
Nice job
AM
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Yup, know how you feel. Good imagery, kept your sentences short and tight which got me through to the end, and the twist was great; a guy going bonkers at a poetry convention, yes, there should be more of that, don't you think? Overall a good read.
Nice job
AM
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the great review, AM. Yeah, I knew once some people, on here, got to the end they wouldn't be too happy, haha. But hey, I had fun writing it and that's all that counts. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly thing.
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without a sense of humor, the universe smacks you up side the head and laughs even louder! a lot of people don't like my style, my writing or sarcasm either, but, there are a lot that do...keep it real my friend, that was good stuff.
AM
Comment from Thal1959
A poetry convention? I still don't know how I feel about that. I was expecting the "you" to be a famous mass-murderer. But the writing is fine, and it really holds the reader's attention...... a poetry convention? Anyway, one nit,
"I wasn't going (to) be slowly tortured to death." (You missed the word "to" between going and be.)
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2017
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A poetry convention? I still don't know how I feel about that. I was expecting the "you" to be a famous mass-murderer. But the writing is fine, and it really holds the reader's attention...... a poetry convention? Anyway, one nit,
"I wasn't going (to) be slowly tortured to death." (You missed the word "to" between going and be.)
Comment Written 05-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the great review, Thal1959. I was just goofing around. I was in the mood to enter a contest and thought I'd add this silliness to the mix. That's why it's so far fetched, that it's a poetry convention making him feel this way, lol. Thank you too for pointing out the goof. I fixed it. I really appreciate the generous stars. Sorry the dumb ending ruined it for you. It was just leading up to a joke. Have a great rest of your weekend.
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You're welcome - it was my pleasure.
Comment from Possummagic
Good story line. Well constructed and followed the guidelines of the contest. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it. Good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2017
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Good story line. Well constructed and followed the guidelines of the contest. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it. Good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the great review, Possum. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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You are welcome
