Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is very interesting what you have penned. I am not in the know about any of this so it is all new to me. I am pretty much in the know about a three year old grandson Monday thru Friday! Good wording and imagery. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

No matter how big the fly may be
if he comes to bother me
I will not let him pass,
in fact he had better haul ass
if not, my baseball bat
will beat and knock him flat

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017

Thanks, nomi

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Hi Bill
I read this several times to adjust to the amazingly creative visions delivered in this work! The words are rich and clever with extraordinary reach, capturing the reader's imagination, thanks for a wonderful read
Mitchell

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017

Thanks, YNWA

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Bill, I think you get a bit more range with this fly group! I immediately thought about a giant fly those blue headed ones and riding to their next destination in Uber instead of flying their all by themselves...favorite line:

"can haul you, me, or disease" ain't it the truth! :) Kiwi

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017

Thanks, Kiwi, for looking at this one.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Big fly caper #5. I hope I never see a fly that big. They hang out in nasty places so I imagine they carry a lot of diseases. We will have to get bigger fly swatters. Good job with this. Marilyn

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2017

Thanks, Marilyn

Comment from BOO ghost

Excellent

yep, they are hosts for many wicked diseases and plagues. Got my yellow fly swat handy in case they land on my cotton candy. Gallinipers galore. Killer picture! Ned to get one of them bug zappersI seen on TV. Get some live action started, mate. Some voltage to exterminate these pesky varmints that like cow bung rolled by a beetle. Nice one!



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 Comment Written 05-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2017

Thanks, BOO.

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

This made me think of the movie where Jeff Blume turns into a fly. That was fiction. What's scary about this is the bit about disease. A nice piece of humor about what modern tech might attempt to do.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2017

The future so bright I gotta wear shades.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

That's great. What we save in fuel costs, we can spend on medical bills. lol

I don't think I want to EVER see a fly big enough to carry me.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2017

Thanks, da, for giving this a peek. Bill

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hahahahaha, Bill, I love your reference to Uber. However, I would hate to be carried away by tose giant flies. Yikes. The blue bottles here are enormous as it is. I'm smiling. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2017

Thanks, Ulla, for looking at this. Bill

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Ewww, little flies are gross enough. They can all haul disease, but one that could haul you or me would be nightmare material indeed. Reading this, I don't know whether to laugh or run and hide.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2017

Thanks, Cindy, for giving this a look see. Bill