My Muse
What's a girl to do?22 total reviews
Comment from Poetic Friend
Now, this is so very funny and so very true. No one wears pantyhose anymore. I will suggest you keep the pantyhose for the winter months. That's when I notice that women wear pantyhose.
Your muse is quite active and kind. She allowed you to create this lovely, flawless metrical poem.
Good luck in the contest, and thank you for the laughter.
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Now, this is so very funny and so very true. No one wears pantyhose anymore. I will suggest you keep the pantyhose for the winter months. That's when I notice that women wear pantyhose.
Your muse is quite active and kind. She allowed you to create this lovely, flawless metrical poem.
Good luck in the contest, and thank you for the laughter.
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
I appreciate you kind comments
Blessings
Janet
Comment from EverInParadise
Wow, I was drawn to read this, as I have muse as well. I don't know where they come from or where they go but they seem to prefer the most inconvenient times to play their games in my head. this is very well done, though for me the last verses seemed forced. Your reference to eye lids falling like dominos and disappearing panty-hose didn't do the rest of the poem justice. I didn't quite get that. This would have been a 4 star but I'm thinking you can do better than you did here. Good luck and keep trying.
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Wow, I was drawn to read this, as I have muse as well. I don't know where they come from or where they go but they seem to prefer the most inconvenient times to play their games in my head. this is very well done, though for me the last verses seemed forced. Your reference to eye lids falling like dominos and disappearing panty-hose didn't do the rest of the poem justice. I didn't quite get that. This would have been a 4 star but I'm thinking you can do better than you did here. Good luck and keep trying.
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the review.
Blessings
Janet
