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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from nomi338
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Human intellect in a fly is purely wasted, quite obviously. Hell in some humans, human intellect is wasted, so what hope could there be for some dumb fly, who does not have the common sense to not fly into the windshield of an on coming car?

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
    Sometimes the world is my windshield
reply by nomi338 on 07-Aug-2017
    I feel you man.
Comment from damommy
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LOL. A lot of good his intelligence did him. They don't look like that when they splat on my windshield.

Very funny. Keep 'em coming.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
    Thank you, da.
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Bill. Love your pranka. Gives me a smile for the day. Wow! The first thing that hit me on opening this was the great artwork, followed by your terrific write. You are very safe writing about the annoyance of flies. Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
    Thank you, Marilyn.
Comment from Possummagic
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I loved the art work. Your poem as usual has high standard of work in your creation of Fly World 3. I was just thinking however with a bug that size splitting on your windsceen, I hope to goodness you don't have Takata air bags in your car!

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
    No kidding. I think I've hit a few of these flies this summer.
reply by Possummagic on 03-Aug-2017
    Great work. :)
reply by Possummagic on 03-Aug-2017
    Lol you haven't seen flies 'til you've seen the Australian outback!