From the Heart
3 Word Entry, fear, riot, heart5 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Congratulations on winning the contest requiring three words. You wove them into the poem seamlessly. I admired your placing the focus where it belongs in this social commentary. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Congratulations on winning the contest requiring three words. You wove them into the poem seamlessly. I admired your placing the focus where it belongs in this social commentary. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Bill Schott
This stanza, From the Heart, uses the three necessary words in a manner which shape the impetus for violent death as a matter of the individual, and not the fact that he/she is armed with a gun. Guns don't kill people (but bullets do a good job).
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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This stanza, From the Heart, uses the three necessary words in a manner which shape the impetus for violent death as a matter of the individual, and not the fact that he/she is armed with a gun. Guns don't kill people (but bullets do a good job).
Comment Written 02-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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Thank you for sharing your insights. Yes. It's the evil in people that pull the trigger.
Comment from RebelRose
You did great in using the required words, making it all make sense and making a good point in the process. I agree with your words one hundred percent.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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You did great in using the required words, making it all make sense and making a good point in the process. I agree with your words one hundred percent.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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Thank you for much for the postive feedback and generous rating. I was hoping someone would see my point of view!
Comment from Wabigoon
True enough, However guns make it easier, yes? Easier to just pull that trigger. As an H bomb is a different thing than a big fire cracker. No, the murder's not in the bomb and fortunately for us, those -- usually -- with their fingers near the trigger have extreme training and oversight. Same should be true of gun owners.
Besy
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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True enough, However guns make it easier, yes? Easier to just pull that trigger. As an H bomb is a different thing than a big fire cracker. No, the murder's not in the bomb and fortunately for us, those -- usually -- with their fingers near the trigger have extreme training and oversight. Same should be true of gun owners.
Besy
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 02-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your insights and positive feedback.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three word poem. You incorporate the three words well in your short poem to make a sensible story about guns that land in the hands of murderous people are the danger not the guns itself.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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A very well-written three word poem. You incorporate the three words well in your short poem to make a sensible story about guns that land in the hands of murderous people are the danger not the guns itself.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your usual insightful review.
