Me in Verse, For Better or Worse
My Philosophy of Life Contest Entry4 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Don. You did a great job with this poem and congratulations for winning the contest. Many good lines within your piece. I particularly like:
"Understand, with longevity (fix typo here) comes aches and pains,
Your extra years are a bargain. (, so) So do not complain."
Marilyn
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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Hi Don. You did a great job with this poem and congratulations for winning the contest. Many good lines within your piece. I particularly like:
"Understand, with longevity (fix typo here) comes aches and pains,
Your extra years are a bargain. (, so) So do not complain."
Marilyn
Comment Written 04-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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Thank you doubly, Marilyn. I made the corrections, as advised. You have the eagle eye!
Don
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem for the This is my Life contest. You gave some really good advice in your poem you have penned. You used very cute art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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This is a very well written poem for the This is my Life contest. You gave some really good advice in your poem you have penned. You used very cute art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 03-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your complimentary comments, Teri.
Comment from Possummagic
I love, love, love your quirky photo and what a fantastic piece of poetry. I only wish I had a six star left to give to you. Your work is amusing and gave me a couple of good chuckles. It's also beautifully crafted, with at times challenging rhyming options. I don't know who you are or what your background but I'm a fan already. Can I please follow you?
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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I love, love, love your quirky photo and what a fantastic piece of poetry. I only wish I had a six star left to give to you. Your work is amusing and gave me a couple of good chuckles. It's also beautifully crafted, with at times challenging rhyming options. I don't know who you are or what your background but I'm a fan already. Can I please follow you?
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Possum, after such flattery, I'll agree to anything you say. I'll be delighted to have you follow me. (It's been a while since I had stalkers. As slow as I am. it shouldn't take you long to to catch up. I'll be looking behind me, to see if you mean it.) Thanks for the 'quirky.'
Blushingly,
The Author
P.S. Believe it or not, un-customarily, I have exhausted the meagre FS quota of six reviewing nominations per month. (It's almost August, so be sure to keep up the good work.)
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I'm not sure how to add you as I don't have a name to follow.
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Not a problem, Possum. When contests end, so does the anonymity. I believe even our existing correspondence will display my alias. (We have exchanged messages before, so you'll likely recognize it.)
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Hmmmmm I wait with baited breath!
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Uggh. Then follow at a distance, please.
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Lol certainly!
Comment from kahpot
A great read and excellent poem love the artwork there are many words-lines in this writing that relate to me and would to many others and you my (great man are humble)****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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A great read and excellent poem love the artwork there are many words-lines in this writing that relate to me and would to many others and you my (great man are humble)****kahpot
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your flattering comments, Kahpot. They're very encouraging, and greatly appreciated.!
