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11 total reviews
Comment from nartoonla
Hi, Oh dear, poor fly..but seems they often can be a nuisance. But liked your sigh.. as every living thing .. deserves to live. But liked it! Number one better .. but two was good. Just cared to stop by and thank you for your review. Nice of you fly catcher. Regards nartoonla
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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Hi, Oh dear, poor fly..but seems they often can be a nuisance. But liked your sigh.. as every living thing .. deserves to live. But liked it! Number one better .. but two was good. Just cared to stop by and thank you for your review. Nice of you fly catcher. Regards nartoonla
Comment Written 02-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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Thanks, nartoonla, for taking a peek. Bill
Comment from sunnilicious
I hate to admit it, but this is a relatable situation, especially in warmer weather months for like everybody. Well thought out and nicely written. Great perspective presented. Nice work.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2017
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I hate to admit it, but this is a relatable situation, especially in warmer weather months for like everybody. Well thought out and nicely written. Great perspective presented. Nice work.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2017
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Thanks, sunnilicious
Comment from nomi338
Wow Bill. I knew that the USMC prepared you to be a cold blooded and efficient killer, but I did not know that extended to insect stage as well. Those of us who absolutely deplore pests such as the common house fly, wish to thank you for your continued service to your country and your fellow man.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Wow Bill. I knew that the USMC prepared you to be a cold blooded and efficient killer, but I did not know that extended to insect stage as well. Those of us who absolutely deplore pests such as the common house fly, wish to thank you for your continued service to your country and your fellow man.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Semper Fi. I have established a No Fly zone.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles Bill
Looks like us fanstroians are gong to be reading about one of worst nasty and germ spreader to be in the house
Are the rear of your series about flies going to be so catchy in my eyes filled with such good rhyme as this one?
Gert
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Smiles Bill
Looks like us fanstroians are gong to be reading about one of worst nasty and germ spreader to be in the house
Are the rear of your series about flies going to be so catchy in my eyes filled with such good rhyme as this one?
Gert
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Thanks, Gert, for checking this out. Bill
Comment from frogbook
This is a fabulous start for a new series. I was telling my family about the sloth poems yesterday, as everyone was talking about loving sloths. Now I will have to tell them about this series as we have a running joke about flies since my daughter killed one with a spray bottle of water when she was small-lol. Poem is so funny with the premise that the fly knew he was coming to die and a great form the way it was written with the palpable SWAT and all.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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This is a fabulous start for a new series. I was telling my family about the sloth poems yesterday, as everyone was talking about loving sloths. Now I will have to tell them about this series as we have a running joke about flies since my daughter killed one with a spray bottle of water when she was small-lol. Poem is so funny with the premise that the fly knew he was coming to die and a great form the way it was written with the palpable SWAT and all.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Wow! Thanks. FB, for the terrific review. Bill
Comment from BOO ghost
Hate them gallinipers! SWAT! SWAT! SWAT! You know... you can hold a fly in a cup of water,drown him,then bury him in a mound of salt and he will come back alive. Done it several times and it works. A friend showed me the trick and it amazed me. BOO-tastic!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Hate them gallinipers! SWAT! SWAT! SWAT! You know... you can hold a fly in a cup of water,drown him,then bury him in a mound of salt and he will come back alive. Done it several times and it works. A friend showed me the trick and it amazed me. BOO-tastic!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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I like the drowning part. That could then be followed by hitting it with a hammer.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Oh goodness Bill time for the fly stories and poems hey? This guy didn't have a chance with the dead eye swatter! A wonderful write as is your usual. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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Oh goodness Bill time for the fly stories and poems hey? This guy didn't have a chance with the dead eye swatter! A wonderful write as is your usual. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 30-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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Thanks, kiwi.
Comment from BeasPeas
You are really getting good at this. Your poem is smooth and, dare I say, interesting? The fly comes to you to die with your trusty fly swatter. First and last line unite your poem. All lines are excellent. Marilyn
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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You are really getting good at this. Your poem is smooth and, dare I say, interesting? The fly comes to you to die with your trusty fly swatter. First and last line unite your poem. All lines are excellent. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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Thanks, Marilyn.
Comment from damommy
Favorite line - 'windage right, won't need a spotter.'
Better flies than mosquitoes, although flies can be almost as pesky.
A New World of Flies. Should be interesting. 8-)
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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Favorite line - 'windage right, won't need a spotter.'
Better flies than mosquitoes, although flies can be almost as pesky.
A New World of Flies. Should be interesting. 8-)
Comment Written 30-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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Thanks, da
Comment from Possummagic
Haha I like that one. Flies in Australia are prolific in summer. They crawl up your nose and into the corner of your eyes. As you can imagine we sell a lot of fly swatters in Australia. Great work once again. I'm learning from you.
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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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Haha I like that one. Flies in Australia are prolific in summer. They crawl up your nose and into the corner of your eyes. As you can imagine we sell a lot of fly swatters in Australia. Great work once again. I'm learning from you.
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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Thank you, PM, for the encouraging review. Bill