Reviews from

Snake Fight

Short Political Poem Contest Entry

4 total reviews 
Comment from Schalk Jacobs
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Actually liked this and the rhyme within the monostich. The word choice is apt for the message you are getting across. Good illustration to prove your point and I also enjoyed the use of hair to highlight your point of view.

Best of luck.

Schalk

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
    What a terrific review, Schalk! Thanks a bunch!!
    Don
Comment from Dean Kuch
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

You think the same way I do about this dynamic duo, Don.
Hey, it's no one's fault but President Trump's that Jeff Simmons holds the position he now does. I also don't blame Simmons for throwing Donny boy to the wolves.
It'll be interesting to see what comes from this.
Good luck in your contest.
~Dean

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
    Thanks, Dean, and congrats for your overwhelming victory.
    Don
reply by Dean Kuch on 02-Aug-2017
    You're welcome, Don, and thank you.
    ~Dean
Comment from humpwhistle
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Thanks. Your adjustment rates another star.

Peace, Lee

Uh, I believe Attorney General Jeff Sessions might object to being identified as Jeff Simmons.
Also, I struggle to find 'poetry' in your question.

Lest you mistake me for a sycophant, I'm a hard-line hippie leftist.

Peace, Lee


 Comment Written 29-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017
    Lee, thank you for the heads-up! I don't know why I didn't notice how un-poemlike my entry was.

    I hastened to come up with a replacement, maybe worth a fiver.

    I've already used the 6-nomination monthly quota, or I' woud have thanked you that way, so thanks again..
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017
    Thanks again, again, Lee. I'm back into 'poetry' now.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This speaks a tricky, intelligent and controversial question raised by the poet in order to know the person who is responsible for the snake fight; I liked.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
    Thanks for your complimentary comments, Alcreator.
    Actually, if there is a question it's do I care if either snake survives the fight?
    Ogden