Glory Days
Stand firm.5 total reviews
Comment from Schalk Jacobs
This is actually well thought out and, I think, a point that a lot of politicians forget. doesn't matter what your political agenda falls in the spectrum, as long as you honour the country. Nicely said... well that is how i see it from your monostich.
Best of luck
Schalk
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
  |
This is actually well thought out and, I think, a point that a lot of politicians forget. doesn't matter what your political agenda falls in the spectrum, as long as you honour the country. Nicely said... well that is how i see it from your monostich.
Best of luck
Schalk
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
-
Thanks for reading and responding. I do appreciate it.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
'nuff said!
I agree.
Your poem is so true. I don't understand why we can't/don't see that we are 1 nation & act like it. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
|
'nuff said!
I agree.
Your poem is so true. I don't understand why we can't/don't see that we are 1 nation & act like it. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 28-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
-
Thanks for reading and responding.
Comment from rspoet
This is a very fine poem and entry for the contest
However, I believe you must have all words on one line to be a monostich
Something like this:
"Head spinning with talking points from left, center, right--I stand firm...for Old Glory."
Unfortunately, all three positions insist they are right and stand foe Old Glory, too.
That's the rub.
Great picture to match your poem
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
|
This is a very fine poem and entry for the contest
However, I believe you must have all words on one line to be a monostich
Something like this:
"Head spinning with talking points from left, center, right--I stand firm...for Old Glory."
Unfortunately, all three positions insist they are right and stand foe Old Glory, too.
That's the rub.
Great picture to match your poem
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 28-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
-
I appreciate your comments. Thanks.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Wonderful image.
-You have met the prompt requirements.
-I like the message in your poem very much.
-It is sincere and shows your love of country.
-There is a lot out there to make
our heads spin, but there are certain
ideals we need to hold on to.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
|
-Wonderful image.
-You have met the prompt requirements.
-I like the message in your poem very much.
-It is sincere and shows your love of country.
-There is a lot out there to make
our heads spin, but there are certain
ideals we need to hold on to.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
-
Thanks for responding to my work.
-
You are welcome.
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your Monostitch for the Short Political Poem contest. You are so right, we need to continue to stand for the principles this country was founded on; freedom of religion, freedom of speech, all men and women being created equal, and taking care of the masses.
~patty~
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
|
thank you for sharing your Monostitch for the Short Political Poem contest. You are so right, we need to continue to stand for the principles this country was founded on; freedom of religion, freedom of speech, all men and women being created equal, and taking care of the masses.
~patty~
Comment Written 28-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
-
Thanks for reading and responding.
