Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very nice 5-7-5 contest entry you have penned for the contest - Paris. You used very good wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Thanks much!

Comment from JanPerry

Excellent

Paris is gorgeous, you have described your feelings in a 5.7.5 poem.
You have managed to rhyme it too.
Well done, good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Thanks so much for your thoughtful review.

Comment from kathleenspalding

Excellent

Really cute and nice five seven five poem gave me a smile. Excellent use of artwork and colors. Contest specifies no author's notes, so better remove before deadline. (Don't blame you for putting them up now!)

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Thanks so much. Someone else gave me the heads up about the notes. I am grateful for the reminder as I had forgotten! They are all gone now!!

reply by kathleenspalding on 25-Jul-2017

You're welcome :-)

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent poem and entry for the Pa-ree contest
I think you have summed it up well
plus picked an excellent photograph to match the presentation
Very well done
Good luck in the voting
RS

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review too.

Comment from Cybertron1986

Excellent

Other than the lack of an accent mark on Cherie (I did read your notes that you weren't able to include one) your piece was accurately and creatively on point in both expression and topic. Great presentation with picture and font color to match the sunset. Overall, I love how the essence of Paris collaborated with the poem's 5-7-5 format. Well done and thought out!

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Thanks so much. I was just reminded about no author notes allowed so had to whisk them out.

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem about Paris. I think that this is an excellent entry for the contest the writing prompt. I like the 575 format in this. Great alliteration and nice and easy flow. Thank you very much for sharing this. God bless you. With love, Lola

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Thanks so much for your lovely and thoughtful review.

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

You've penned this 5-7-5 well.
That last line though: 'Ooh, la, la..... Pa-ree' - It makes me want to go.
The artwork looks good. The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the picture and color of font selected.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your version of Paris.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-

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 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Thanks so much for this thoughtful review.