Therefore I Am
Inspiration can be found all around us.27 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
A free verse really well done with all the sensations of feeling, hearing and sight involved in the descriptions. I'm guessing that it's Andrea Bocelli singing in Italian and the physical experience of art is affirming one's existence.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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A free verse really well done with all the sensations of feeling, hearing and sight involved in the descriptions. I'm guessing that it's Andrea Bocelli singing in Italian and the physical experience of art is affirming one's existence.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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You are correct. It was Andrea Bocelli and yes your response is just that "the physical experience of art is affirming one's existence". Thanks so much for your very perceptive review. It is so very much appreciated.
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I love it when poet and reader connect like that!
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Me too!
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Thanks so much for your kind review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your free verse poetry for the contest. Within the lines of your poem, you have expressed so many thoughts of what makes up the human condition.
Well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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thank you for sharing your free verse poetry for the contest. Within the lines of your poem, you have expressed so many thoughts of what makes up the human condition.
Well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 28-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much for your review. It is very much appreciated.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Poem depicts that inspiration can indeed come from several sources surrounding a person.
Well written and details its theme.
Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Poem depicts that inspiration can indeed come from several sources surrounding a person.
Well written and details its theme.
Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much for your review. It is so much appreciated.
Comment from stevensandiego
I enjoyed this writing. I thought it was well written and conveyed a message
The words were well chosen and right to the point.
Appeals to all ages. I would recommend it to family and friends.
It is philosophical and educational
Steven San Diego
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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I enjoyed this writing. I thought it was well written and conveyed a message
The words were well chosen and right to the point.
Appeals to all ages. I would recommend it to family and friends.
It is philosophical and educational
Steven San Diego
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Thanks so much for your kind review. It is very much appreciated.
Comment from Curly Girly
Hi, I enjoyed reading your poem for this contest. It's a lovely entry.
The first line refers to being 'tropical and warm.'
Your image choice is dark. Perhaps you might consider swapping it for a warmer, tropical image for this contest.
I'm not sure who 'Andre' is in your poem. Perhaps he was dear to you but has now passed away?
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Hi, I enjoyed reading your poem for this contest. It's a lovely entry.
The first line refers to being 'tropical and warm.'
Your image choice is dark. Perhaps you might consider swapping it for a warmer, tropical image for this contest.
I'm not sure who 'Andre' is in your poem. Perhaps he was dear to you but has now passed away?
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the wonderful review. I will take your advice into consideration.
I was listening to Andrea Bocceli's cd and wrote this on my way to work in 2003.
Kind regards.
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Ah, I love Andrea Bocceli's music. Blind, but handsome, rich and talented.
Comment from Vicki Easterly
Wow! What beautiful descriptions, that change like your being in the lines of this poem. No forced rhyme, just unconfined imagery. You are what you need to be, when you need to be. Fabulous job.
Oh, one thing: Did you mean for 60% to be written after Mother Earth?
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Wow! What beautiful descriptions, that change like your being in the lines of this poem. No forced rhyme, just unconfined imagery. You are what you need to be, when you need to be. Fabulous job.
Oh, one thing: Did you mean for 60% to be written after Mother Earth?
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you so very much for your very inspiring review. I am so thankful and encouraged to keep working towards perfecting my craft. Also, thank you for mentioning the typo I have "60%". I just deleted it.
Have a wonderful week Vicki.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks poet is there in every form, mode of existence, everywhere around us like inspiration for survival, even he can be seen in dreams, anybody, anything; I liked.
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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This speaks poet is there in every form, mode of existence, everywhere around us like inspiration for survival, even he can be seen in dreams, anybody, anything; I liked.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for your very inspiring review.
It is very much appreciated.
Kind regards.
