Paris Kiss
5-7-5 Entry7 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Super job. Art work is a great addition. I like the lovers kissing behind the umbrella. Your 5-7-5 is original and interesting with good word choices. Gives a hint of romance in the springtime. Marilyn
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Super job. Art work is a great addition. I like the lovers kissing behind the umbrella. Your 5-7-5 is original and interesting with good word choices. Gives a hint of romance in the springtime. Marilyn
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Thank you! Just some old fashioned romance. Who could ask for more???
Comment from l.raven
a kiss alone can stay with you...but one in Paris...forever...love the wording in your poem...and love this picture...very nicely written...xxoo
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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a kiss alone can stay with you...but one in Paris...forever...love the wording in your poem...and love this picture...very nicely written...xxoo
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much!
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loved your poem...and you are so welcome...xxoo
Comment from frogbook
Wonderful and original poem for the contest. One of the best in this well attended contest. Best of luck in the voting with this worthy entry.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Wonderful and original poem for the contest. One of the best in this well attended contest. Best of luck in the voting with this worthy entry.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your kind comments! Not very witty entry. Just romantic...
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, The Kiss, has the right set up and follows the Paris theme of love and a one time memorable kiss that makes the world special. Nice.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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This 5-7-5, The Kiss, has the right set up and follows the Paris theme of love and a one time memorable kiss that makes the world special. Nice.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Thank you! Not witty. Just romantic.
Comment from pipersfancy
I think everyone would agree with the poet's assessment of a spring day in Paris - simply unforgettable!
Lovely image to accompany this sweet 5-7-5.
Best of luck in the contest,
pf
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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I think everyone would agree with the poet's assessment of a spring day in Paris - simply unforgettable!
Lovely image to accompany this sweet 5-7-5.
Best of luck in the contest,
pf
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your positive comments!
Comment from EverInParadise
I liked this and your choice of art for it is per.fect. This type poem in very difficult for me so I am intrigued by those of you who handle it so well. Good job. I have no negative comment
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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I liked this and your choice of art for it is per.fect. This type poem in very difficult for me so I am intrigued by those of you who handle it so well. Good job. I have no negative comment
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your well penned 5-7-5 for the contest. Your chosen picture was the perfect compliment to the limited syllable count. You conveyed the wonder of being in Paris in the rain. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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thank you for sharing your well penned 5-7-5 for the contest. Your chosen picture was the perfect compliment to the limited syllable count. You conveyed the wonder of being in Paris in the rain. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your positive and thoughtful feedback!
