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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Somebody got veeeeery well-acquainted with the space bar, sir!! ;) Had to change it up -- been through horses and spiders and now octopi... hoping the legs aren't doubling every time... lol!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Somebody got veeeeery well-acquainted with the space bar, sir!! ;) Had to change it up -- been through horses and spiders and now octopi... hoping the legs aren't doubling every time... lol!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Too much coffee.
Comment from nomi338
I see him. Very clever. Of course you know that too much of this and you are going to go blind. Oh did no one tell you? Messing about with uctopusses in such a manner is tantamount to masturbation, which will ultimately lead to total blindness. Or at least that's what I heard.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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I see him. Very clever. Of course you know that too much of this and you are going to go blind. Oh did no one tell you? Messing about with uctopusses in such a manner is tantamount to masturbation, which will ultimately lead to total blindness. Or at least that's what I heard.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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I limited myself to ten so I may only need glasses.
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Good for you. LOL.
Comment from His Grayness
Not much can be said except: THANKS FOR A REALLY CLEVER WORK HERE! I saw the octopus and glad I was not close enough to get grabbed! Thanks for the fun! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Not much can be said except: THANKS FOR A REALLY CLEVER WORK HERE! I saw the octopus and glad I was not close enough to get grabbed! Thanks for the fun! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Thank you, HG, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-structured octopus that even on a tablet is in perfect shape of an octopus. With the body on top and the eight legs tumbling down from the body.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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A very well-structured octopus that even on a tablet is in perfect shape of an octopus. With the body on top and the eight legs tumbling down from the body.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Thanks, Sandra. I'm glad it worked. Bill
Comment from Eternal Muse
Bill, this us amazing! I do see an octopus, carved with your words. Shape poetry is hard to do, I once did a swan. You did a great job, and I applaud you!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Bill, this us amazing! I do see an octopus, carved with your words. Shape poetry is hard to do, I once did a swan. You did a great job, and I applaud you!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Thanks, yt
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welcome, bs
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting concrete shape poem you have penned about the octopus. You used really good colors. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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This is a very interesting concrete shape poem you have penned about the octopus. You used really good colors. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Teri, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from damommy
This is amazing. How did you come up with this one? It's a perfect shape poem. That must have taken a lot of work.
I see you're finished with the Octopus World. What next?
Love it!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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This is amazing. How did you come up with this one? It's a perfect shape poem. That must have taken a lot of work.
I see you're finished with the Octopus World. What next?
Love it!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Thanks, da, for the great review. It was a patience tester to be certain. Bill
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Wow! Great job.
Comment from robina1978
You don't see a shape poem so often. I enjoyed your poem about the octopus world. It came out very well I never get these right. Thanks for sharing this chapter.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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You don't see a shape poem so often. I enjoyed your poem about the octopus world. It came out very well I never get these right. Thanks for sharing this chapter.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Ine, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from BeasPeas
You are too much!!! Enjoyable Octopus World #10. You're really getting good at this thing. Shape is perfect and impressive in your effort. I saw an octopus image on public domain/copyright free and thought of your mission to write about them. Check it out. Marilyn
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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You are too much!!! Enjoyable Octopus World #10. You're really getting good at this thing. Shape is perfect and impressive in your effort. I saw an octopus image on public domain/copyright free and thought of your mission to write about them. Check it out. Marilyn
Comment Written 17-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Marilyn, for the review and the idea. Octopi are over now. I will need a different creature to celebrate. I've done Horse World, Spider World, and Octopus World 1-10. Got a suggestion?
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No suggestions for you, Bill. You're creative enough to find one to write about that gets the juices flowing. :)
Comment from trimple
Hello there, Bill.
Love this bonkers write of yours. Not sure about the '10 though. What did you mean?
As I recall, the clever octopus has but 8 tentacles...
A fun write and artistic layout :)
Much love
trimple
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Hello there, Bill.
Love this bonkers write of yours. Not sure about the '10 though. What did you mean?
As I recall, the clever octopus has but 8 tentacles...
A fun write and artistic layout :)
Much love
trimple
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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I've done Horse World 1-10, Spider World 1-10, and Octopus World 1-10. Now I need a new critter to fritter. Got any ideas?
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Oh! lol
Erm...
What about the leggy centipede? :)
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How about the speedy sloth?
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LOL Go for it!
:)
hugs xxxx