Secret Admirer
Free verse5 total reviews
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Wow, oh my goodness Trish, this poem is on fire, full of sensuality yet it is still clean and eloquent. I love how smooth the words are. It's that smooth jazz sot of poem, drink it in with a smooth glass of wine and candle light glows. You are quite the romance poetry writer, Trish...I love it!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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Wow, oh my goodness Trish, this poem is on fire, full of sensuality yet it is still clean and eloquent. I love how smooth the words are. It's that smooth jazz sot of poem, drink it in with a smooth glass of wine and candle light glows. You are quite the romance poetry writer, Trish...I love it!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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Tier, you warmed my heart with your comments. I am honored to know a great sensual writer like yourself enjoyed my poem.
I feel blessed to have you as a reviewer. Different styles brought us together, but we are on the same theme page !!!!!!
Thank you so much.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Curly Girly
Voyeurism? Not sure.
This poem tells of a person who longs for their ex-partner who is now in the arms of another but remains unresponsive. It's all a dream, a wish.
I like this part:
A secret love you'll never know
Shared only by silent words
Silent words--penned.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Voyeurism? Not sure.
This poem tells of a person who longs for their ex-partner who is now in the arms of another but remains unresponsive. It's all a dream, a wish.
I like this part:
A secret love you'll never know
Shared only by silent words
Silent words--penned.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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It is a male who's In love with a married woman, but there can be no union. Thanks so much for your interpretation, it could be as you said. I really appreciated your kind review Curly Girlyh
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This is a very well done piece on love that is unforbidden because he/she is from another relationship. I could feel the frustration and it was very good
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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This is a very well done piece on love that is unforbidden because he/she is from another relationship. I could feel the frustration and it was very good
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Your opinion means a lot to me , thank you so much for reviewing.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh my friend this is beautifully written it reads so well through the verses sad but beautiful only to be admired from a distance with so much love in the heart well done my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Oh my friend this is beautifully written it reads so well through the verses sad but beautiful only to be admired from a distance with so much love in the heart well done my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much Jill, I really appreciate and value your writer's opinions
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
You've written a good poem.
The content is deep.
Feelings are desired and fantasized.
This poem tells the reader that one loves another even though she is with someone else. He does so because he knows that her heart is not with the other person. However, their love may never come to be. For, she is choosing to settle for what she has. She is too blind to see that another loves her.
The image shown captures the meaning of this poem. The background goes well with the art and color of font selected.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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You've written a good poem.
The content is deep.
Feelings are desired and fantasized.
This poem tells the reader that one loves another even though she is with someone else. He does so because he knows that her heart is not with the other person. However, their love may never come to be. For, she is choosing to settle for what she has. She is too blind to see that another loves her.
The image shown captures the meaning of this poem. The background goes well with the art and color of font selected.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Thanks Nicole so much for reviewing so kindly
Hugs, Trisha