2017 JAPANESE POETRY
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Haiku (reflections)"A collection of Japanese poetry
13 total reviews
Comment from Grasshopper2
Hello She-Who-(or is it Whom?) Must Be Obeyed,
I like your reflection poem that mirrors the sky in the water which is written in your posted words - nice! Like Pete and Repeat, it goes round and round.
Grasshopper
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Hello She-Who-(or is it Whom?) Must Be Obeyed,
I like your reflection poem that mirrors the sky in the water which is written in your posted words - nice! Like Pete and Repeat, it goes round and round.
Grasshopper
Comment Written 20-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words and for reading so many in a row.
Gypsy hugs
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You are welcome. It was a Gypsy-a-thon.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Gypsy, this is just beautiful...either way you say it...Queen of Haiku...I love your poem sweet girl...and love your stunning picture...very nicely written...love you Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2017
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Hi Gypsy, this is just beautiful...either way you say it...Queen of Haiku...I love your poem sweet girl...and love your stunning picture...very nicely written...love you Linda xxoo
Comment Written 15-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the six stars, Linda, and I appreciate that you read and reviewed my haiku. Have a great weekend honey. Luv ya.
Gypsy hugs
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love those hugs...you are soooo very welcome...have a great weekend as well...love to ya Linda xxoo
Comment from Mark Valentine
Perhaps the best example I've seen yet of the poem matching (or better yet, mirroring) the picture. So clever! Witty and pretty (and not at all shitty). Loved it!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
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Perhaps the best example I've seen yet of the poem matching (or better yet, mirroring) the picture. So clever! Witty and pretty (and not at all shitty). Loved it!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
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Wow, two sixes! Thank you very much, you are very kind.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from DR DIP
I like the concept of this Haiku. Is there actually such a thing as a double Haiku is this actually a form? Just curious that's why I am asking and what better person to ask?
The punchline 'Two for one special' is a good one. Thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
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I like the concept of this Haiku. Is there actually such a thing as a double Haiku is this actually a form? Just curious that's why I am asking and what better person to ask?
The punchline 'Two for one special' is a good one. Thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 14-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
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I never have seen this form but haiku suites are common. We can call it gypsy haiku .... LoL
Thank you for the review.
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, again!
I like this mirror-like poem. I am thinking of a song 'Reflections upon my Mind', or something. Okay, I am just trying to fill up space, I'll be truthful. I don't find any error in this or have any suggestions. It's cool, I like 'magenta clouds' it's very colorful. (It's so early here it's not even five a.m.)
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
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Hello, again!
I like this mirror-like poem. I am thinking of a song 'Reflections upon my Mind', or something. Okay, I am just trying to fill up space, I'll be truthful. I don't find any error in this or have any suggestions. It's cool, I like 'magenta clouds' it's very colorful. (It's so early here it's not even five a.m.)
Comment Written 14-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review.
Comment from Mark Schardine
Those of us who enjoy seeing the water in the evening hours, and pondering the reflection of the clouds on the still water, value this very good poem.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Those of us who enjoy seeing the water in the evening hours, and pondering the reflection of the clouds on the still water, value this very good poem.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Joan E.
I liked the mirrored-image effect and the colorful text, along with the spectacular, parallel picture. I usually take advantage of "two for one" specials! Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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I liked the mirrored-image effect and the colorful text, along with the spectacular, parallel picture. I usually take advantage of "two for one" specials! Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thanks, Joan, I appreciate your review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Gypsy
looks like you like to watch sunset or sunrises.
I like you haiku(s) of how you saw two different hues of the clouds for the prize of one.
Gert
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Hello Gypsy
looks like you like to watch sunset or sunrises.
I like you haiku(s) of how you saw two different hues of the clouds for the prize of one.
Gert
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
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You are welcome Gypsy
Did you read my addition to your prayer haiku challenge
happy frame of mind
Gert
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No, I will go look for it.
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Thank you Gypsy
Gert
Comment from Ric Myworld
One of those beautiful sights that takes our breath away, and described in haiku to give us a three-for-one special. Yes, I did read "Two for one special." But with the picture included gives us three. Thanks for another fine poem. :-)
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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One of those beautiful sights that takes our breath away, and described in haiku to give us a three-for-one special. Yes, I did read "Two for one special." But with the picture included gives us three. Thanks for another fine poem. :-)
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Hitcher
Wow! Now that is one stunning accompanying picture friend : ) I have to ask, what came first the clever and very creative double haiku or the beautiful picture? They are perfection together...very nice!!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Wow! Now that is one stunning accompanying picture friend : ) I have to ask, what came first the clever and very creative double haiku or the beautiful picture? They are perfection together...very nice!!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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The haiku came first. :) thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs