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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Can't he just 'ink' it away...?!! ;) Had to change it up -- been through horses and spiders and now octopi... hoping the legs aren't doubling every time... lol!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Can't he just 'ink' it away...?!! ;) Had to change it up -- been through horses and spiders and now octopi... hoping the legs aren't doubling every time... lol!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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He was in the pee-ink.
Comment from nomi338
Man that is one sick looking octopus. What is it about green? People and animals that are drawn green just look sick to me. I wonder if it is conditioned, have we been taught that when someone looks green around the gills that they are sick? I don't know but the case of this illustration, dud definitely looks sick
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Man that is one sick looking octopus. What is it about green? People and animals that are drawn green just look sick to me. I wonder if it is conditioned, have we been taught that when someone looks green around the gills that they are sick? I don't know but the case of this illustration, dud definitely looks sick
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thanks, nomi.
Comment from Gloria ....
You know it! I doesn't make a darn bit of difference how many arms you have if what you need, in this instance toilet paper is nowhere within arms reach.
Great fun with this gem, Bill.
Gloria
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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You know it! I doesn't make a darn bit of difference how many arms you have if what you need, in this instance toilet paper is nowhere within arms reach.
Great fun with this gem, Bill.
Gloria
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thanks, Gloria
Comment from damommy
Hilarious! All those arms, and no paper. Hahahaha
That face says it all.
What an imagination you have. I like it. 8-)
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Hilarious! All those arms, and no paper. Hahahaha
That face says it all.
What an imagination you have. I like it. 8-)
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thanks, da
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Thanks, da
Comment from Teri7
lol I do not know where you come up with this stuff, but this was pretty funny. To me if an octopus wanted to use its arms it would be way too many. Very good wording and art work. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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lol I do not know where you come up with this stuff, but this was pretty funny. To me if an octopus wanted to use its arms it would be way too many. Very good wording and art work. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thanks, Teri.
Comment from rheabug
Creation is the name of the game and create you did very nicely. Thank you for sharing your humor in this crazy poem. I give it a thumbs up for this presentation. Hugs
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Creation is the name of the game and create you did very nicely. Thank you for sharing your humor in this crazy poem. I give it a thumbs up for this presentation. Hugs
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thanks, rheabug.
Comment from Mistydawn
It's a cute poem about an octopus, made me chuckle a bit. It has a nice flow and is well within the guidelines, Thank you for sharing your humorous poem with us
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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It's a cute poem about an octopus, made me chuckle a bit. It has a nice flow and is well within the guidelines, Thank you for sharing your humorous poem with us
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thanks, MD.