Grandma's Teachings
Learning right from wrong contest entry40 total reviews
Comment from Monz1
Hillarious! Payback for sure. Poem flows well with bouncy rhythm and clear rhymes. Children would surely appreciate the 'toilet humour'.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Hillarious! Payback for sure. Poem flows well with bouncy rhythm and clear rhymes. Children would surely appreciate the 'toilet humour'.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the great review, Monz. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly thing.
Comment from bhogg
Don't know if you'll win your contest, but you certainly won a smile from me. I remember those dinners at Grandma's house. I may have learned a thing or two, but can't top your lesson. Bill
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Don't know if you'll win your contest, but you certainly won a smile from me. I remember those dinners at Grandma's house. I may have learned a thing or two, but can't top your lesson. Bill
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the great review, Bill. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from patcelaw
Mean ol' grandmas do have a way of putting the defiant young one in order. But when the children are grown, they may well look back to that time and appreciate what their grandmothers taught them. Good luck in the contest. Patricia
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Mean ol' grandmas do have a way of putting the defiant young one in order. But when the children are grown, they may well look back to that time and appreciate what their grandmothers taught them. Good luck in the contest. Patricia
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Yes they do. Thank you for the excellent review and good luck wishes, Patricia. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from godlucifer
a kid is going to be a kid. usually a kid don't understand the meaning from right to wrong. it takes time for them to understand as time grows. whatever they did wrong they will understand as they get older. your poem was amuse to read and it was quite humorous. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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a kid is going to be a kid. usually a kid don't understand the meaning from right to wrong. it takes time for them to understand as time grows. whatever they did wrong they will understand as they get older. your poem was amuse to read and it was quite humorous. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the great review, godlucifer. I'm glad you liked this silly thing.
Comment from Poetic Friend
This is just too funny. However, the kid learned where not to engage in such behavior.
We can't take for granted that a child would know such.
I am just curious, is this fictional or non-fictional?
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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This is just too funny. However, the kid learned where not to engage in such behavior.
We can't take for granted that a child would know such.
I am just curious, is this fictional or non-fictional?
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Lol, fiction. Get away with that at my grandma's? No way. Thank you for the great review,PF. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Comment from hari anand
This is one good entry of learning right from wrong and that to from Grandma spank . picture is so cute like the one punished boy . best of luck for the contest
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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This is one good entry of learning right from wrong and that to from Grandma spank . picture is so cute like the one punished boy . best of luck for the contest
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the great review, H. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Comment from dragonpoet
Well at least the boy learned something about consequences of his actions. Though he was probably not disciplines for farting but for the way he answered the question.
If he said the "Excuse me" he was asked for probably nothing major would of happened. Though maybe he shouldn't of been forced to eat all this food he didn't like.
Hope you did well in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Well at least the boy learned something about consequences of his actions. Though he was probably not disciplines for farting but for the way he answered the question.
If he said the "Excuse me" he was asked for probably nothing major would of happened. Though maybe he shouldn't of been forced to eat all this food he didn't like.
Hope you did well in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the great review, DP. Yeah, I couldn't have him simply say excuse me. Lol. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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You're welcome.
dp
Comment from Mustang Patty
poor little kid! Grandma's house is supposed to be fun and a place where a kid can have fun. Your story reminded me of my mother-in-law's house and how my son must have felt when we went there for dinner.
You certainly met the requirements of the prompt and your entry was humorous and fun to read. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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poor little kid! Grandma's house is supposed to be fun and a place where a kid can have fun. Your story reminded me of my mother-in-law's house and how my son must have felt when we went there for dinner.
You certainly met the requirements of the prompt and your entry was humorous and fun to read. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, MP. I'm glad you liked this silly thing.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem to teach children the right manners from the wrong. We do not talk about what we have done in our pants when we want to be excused from the table and never fart out loud.
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A very well-written poem to teach children the right manners from the wrong. We do not talk about what we have done in our pants when we want to be excused from the table and never fart out loud.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from TPAC
Delighting array of views in this story, not quite as smooth in its conveyance, still retains writer's wit and charm about its situation. I found spots very amusing to mind.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Delighting array of views in this story, not quite as smooth in its conveyance, still retains writer's wit and charm about its situation. I found spots very amusing to mind.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review, TPAC. I'm glad you liked this silly thing.
