Just the Same
Still remembered8 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Just the Same, is a sweet remembrance of our first good and faithful friend. when we're kids, differences seem tough to deal with, but we know inside that it's the differences that create the affection we maintain forever. Nice.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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This poem, Just the Same, is a sweet remembrance of our first good and faithful friend. when we're kids, differences seem tough to deal with, but we know inside that it's the differences that create the affection we maintain forever. Nice.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the read and the comment. The challenge did bring back memories.
Comment from Irish Rain
Awww..this is a PRECIOUS entry!! Loved it!! My son had a 'teddy' that wasn't a teddy. It was a blue puppy. Which I still have. But that was his teddy. This is wonderful! Blessings....
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Awww..this is a PRECIOUS entry!! Loved it!! My son had a 'teddy' that wasn't a teddy. It was a blue puppy. Which I still have. But that was his teddy. This is wonderful! Blessings....
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your read and your review. I think we all need a teddy from time to time.
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written children's poem. I like the rhyming scheme throughout its very soft and subtle. The alliteration is great. I think this will do well in the contest. God bless you. I wish you all the best and good luck. With love, la
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written children's poem. I like the rhyming scheme throughout its very soft and subtle. The alliteration is great. I think this will do well in the contest. God bless you. I wish you all the best and good luck. With love, la
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the read and your kind review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem about your precious panda bear. Good job on the rhyme & story. Your lines flow well & tell a great story.
In the announcement, it states to use the picture provided. However, it doesn't say that on the rules page. Maybe pm the sponsor & ask. I really believe you are to use the picture provided. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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I enjoyed your poem about your precious panda bear. Good job on the rhyme & story. Your lines flow well & tell a great story.
In the announcement, it states to use the picture provided. However, it doesn't say that on the rules page. Maybe pm the sponsor & ask. I really believe you are to use the picture provided. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thanks for the advice. I will check.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. We all had a teddy bear one or other time in our lives. A panda bear was not popular when I was a child, but they are popular today. I remember my fkyffy brown Teddy bear that end up hairless after years of cuddling.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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A very well-written poem. We all had a teddy bear one or other time in our lives. A panda bear was not popular when I was a child, but they are popular today. I remember my fkyffy brown Teddy bear that end up hairless after years of cuddling.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the rad and the comment. Yes, my guy had a bald spot too.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how a mom remembers her darling and beloved child Charlie, she sees teddy bear another child plays with, Charlie's memory echoes as she sees the same; I liked.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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This speaks how a mom remembers her darling and beloved child Charlie, she sees teddy bear another child plays with, Charlie's memory echoes as she sees the same; I liked.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Nice interpretation. Didn't really consider this aspect. Thank you for a different view.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
After reading 'Just the Same', I find that it meets the requirements of the contest and makes a good entry.
This is a great read for young children.
My baby girl is just 22 months old, and the bear she once held as she slept is now put up because she's afraid of it. I'll keep it and maybe when she's a little older, she'll come back to it.
The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the picture and color of font chosen.
Thanks for sharing your version of Teddy Bear.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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After reading 'Just the Same', I find that it meets the requirements of the contest and makes a good entry.
This is a great read for young children.
My baby girl is just 22 months old, and the bear she once held as she slept is now put up because she's afraid of it. I'll keep it and maybe when she's a little older, she'll come back to it.
The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the picture and color of font chosen.
Thanks for sharing your version of Teddy Bear.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful review and I hope your daughter will again love her bear.
Comment from Waishali Deshmukh
Your autobiographical poem captures the childhood memories so beautifully. It flows smoothly and evokes the childhood memories. Good work. Wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Your autobiographical poem captures the childhood memories so beautifully. It flows smoothly and evokes the childhood memories. Good work. Wish you all the best.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the read and your kind words.
