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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh my gosh, is that a real octopus? Aaaack - how cool!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Oh my gosh, is that a real octopus? Aaaack - how cool!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Think it?s a plant.
Comment from nomi338
OK, you have done it now. I personally find the mention of kelp and diet in the same sentence on the same page offensive. Of course you did not know it beforehand, but that is no excuse. So what if I am fat, I did not need that painful reminder.
Relax, I'm kidding. I honestly could not think of any worthwhile comment so I just decided to wing it.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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OK, you have done it now. I personally find the mention of kelp and diet in the same sentence on the same page offensive. Of course you did not know it beforehand, but that is no excuse. So what if I am fat, I did not need that painful reminder.
Relax, I'm kidding. I honestly could not think of any worthwhile comment so I just decided to wing it.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thanks, nomi.
Comment from BeasPeas
LOL! Kelp diet it is, then. Another amusing octopus piece to add to your series. I like the image to accompany it, too. I'm enjoying your foray into the land of spiders and other creatures. Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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LOL! Kelp diet it is, then. Another amusing octopus piece to add to your series. I like the image to accompany it, too. I'm enjoying your foray into the land of spiders and other creatures. Marilyn
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Marilyn, for the encouraging review. Bill
Comment from damommy
Where DO you get these wonderful ideas?
Oscar ate so much kelp, he's beginning to look like it. I once knew a lady who ate so much onion, she always smelled like one. True.
Keep it up. Makes my day. 8-)
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Where DO you get these wonderful ideas?
Oscar ate so much kelp, he's beginning to look like it. I once knew a lady who ate so much onion, she always smelled like one. True.
Keep it up. Makes my day. 8-)
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Thanks, da, for the energetic review. Bill
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
You've written a great 5-7-5
I especially like the last line: 'he looks FAB-ulousssss!!!'
The image shown supports the topic discussed. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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You've written a great 5-7-5
I especially like the last line: 'he looks FAB-ulousssss!!!'
The image shown supports the topic discussed. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Thanks, Nicole.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the continental dish served on the table, it is not so cheap, high price paid for the delicious food and now everything and on the table he looks fabulous; I liked.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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This speaks the continental dish served on the table, it is not so cheap, high price paid for the delicious food and now everything and on the table he looks fabulous; I liked.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Thanks, ALD