Comment from Hayley Solomon

Excellent

What a lovely piece, with great movement, rhythmic rhyme and a gentle message of discovered insight. I like it a lot, well done and good luck for competition.
Best,
Hayley

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017

thank you very much

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

After reading 'Tony', I find that it is a great piece not only for adults but children as well. It teaches them NOT to bully others or be mean to them.
I like how the ending turned out.
The image shown would be great with this in a pamphlet or children's book. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your version of Learning Right from Wrong.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-

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 Comment Written 08-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017

thank you so much!

Comment from Monz1

Excellent

Touching poem. Great to teach kids not to judge people purely from the outer and antibullying message is fab, really needs to get out there into the Universe. Cheers :)

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 Comment Written 08-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017

thanks so much! I agree. I wrote middlegrade book addressing bullying.

reply by Monz1 on 08-Jul-2017

Awesome. What is your book title?

reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017

The Worst Five Months Ever
available online through Barnes and Noble and Amazon
thanks!