Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "The Reaper"Dawn of Chaos
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Comment from David M. Miller
That's some thick poetic format. Can't speed read it. Very strong. It feels like it has another layer I am not grasping beyond a general description of death? But whatever the case its a good poem.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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That's some thick poetic format. Can't speed read it. Very strong. It feels like it has another layer I am not grasping beyond a general description of death? But whatever the case its a good poem.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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I find your reponse captivating to my interests. The thought of seeing beyond something else apparent is interesting to me. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed view.
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I thought your piece was very creative and I enjoyed reading it. Perhaps you might think about condensing this a little.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I thought your piece was very creative and I enjoyed reading it. Perhaps you might think about condensing this a little.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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I will consider your suggestion, at least this particular write other viewers share some of your views. Thanking you for your generous rate and warming thoughts
Comment from patsolstad
I must admit, I am quite confused. I have now read your poem four times, and am still not quite sure what you are trying to say...the syntax is very new to me. If your intention was to 'force' readers to work hard at understanding what you are trying to impart, you have succeeded! I will keep trying, though...
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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I must admit, I am quite confused. I have now read your poem four times, and am still not quite sure what you are trying to say...the syntax is very new to me. If your intention was to 'force' readers to work hard at understanding what you are trying to impart, you have succeeded! I will keep trying, though...
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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No it's me trying to improve my grammar flaws, syntax violation of proper rules making revisions. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This is one of those offerings that really has the mind thrown for a loop...it's called the reaper but the picture is almost a comical one and then the words are anything but.. whew! ;) This is certainly a powerful offering, but I would suggest, perhaps, a different picture. :) ;) Thanx fo sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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This is one of those offerings that really has the mind thrown for a loop...it's called the reaper but the picture is almost a comical one and then the words are anything but.. whew! ;) This is certainly a powerful offering, but I would suggest, perhaps, a different picture. :) ;) Thanx fo sharing! ;)
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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I see another view other than dark gloom for the picture, seeng Death walk among the scented flowers is a super suggestive intake by the painted. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from Artasylum
This is up to your high standards... II love, love the image it is a comical grim reaper scene... you never fail to entertain...
Lesser charm heart hates of love voiced, unhappiness a trip drags a cart of tears, not a word a dart quick cut to victims.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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This is up to your high standards... II love, love the image it is a comical grim reaper scene... you never fail to entertain...
Lesser charm heart hates of love voiced, unhappiness a trip drags a cart of tears, not a word a dart quick cut to victims.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Glad aspects in this particular write were appealing to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from Sandra Montanino
Okay, so you are a very talented poet. This is the kind of poem that I have to read several times to get. the true meaning. It definitely has an iron hammer of the dark side. That comes through. I'm sure you will do really well as a poet!
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Okay, so you are a very talented poet. This is the kind of poem that I have to read several times to get. the true meaning. It definitely has an iron hammer of the dark side. That comes through. I'm sure you will do really well as a poet!
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Fighting like going against Rocky, swirling in head from punches, pleased certain aspects in this write were appealing to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from Raul1
This sounds like a murder mystery crime poem. I like how you structured this poem. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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This sounds like a murder mystery crime poem. I like how you structured this poem. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Grammar seems my problem and I agree, even this write has revisions to correct what I call pits. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Miss Sherry
Religious overtones make this a read to pay attention to
Artwork is funky - which I love, but your message is serious. Reader must pay attention to nibble rich chunks of truth
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Religious overtones make this a read to pay attention to
Artwork is funky - which I love, but your message is serious. Reader must pay attention to nibble rich chunks of truth
Comment Written 28-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Coming from an Old Poet these views I will treasure, wishing more of my writes bring forth your enthusiasm. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from jmshumate
A well written poem. You've used many descriptive word choices in this poem which give the reader much to picture in their head. Who is the reaper?
"The Lord gives and the Lord takes away, blessed be the name of the Lord"
Only the giver of life can decide the time of someone's life
Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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A well written poem. You've used many descriptive word choices in this poem which give the reader much to picture in their head. Who is the reaper?
"The Lord gives and the Lord takes away, blessed be the name of the Lord"
Only the giver of life can decide the time of someone's life
Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 26-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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Trully spoken, needing your good shout back, thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Angels are the reapers, endurance is the bringer of death, God the Judge, above all, well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring. Happy New Year! -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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Angels are the reapers, endurance is the bringer of death, God the Judge, above all, well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring. Happy New Year! -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 26-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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I'm trying, getting past initial writes current challenge. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
