Haiku(fire may cremate)
Haiku fire2 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your haiku with fire as its subject. Good job on the style of the haiku. Your syllables are in good count & your lines connect accordingly.
I like the picture your well chosen words create, too. Though fire may destroy, the ideas remain to be resurrected like the Phoenix. Ideas are just that until writers give them life.
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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I enjoyed your haiku with fire as its subject. Good job on the style of the haiku. Your syllables are in good count & your lines connect accordingly.
I like the picture your well chosen words create, too. Though fire may destroy, the ideas remain to be resurrected like the Phoenix. Ideas are just that until writers give them life.
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thanks for reading and critique zanya
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks fire may cremate anything and everything and ideas can gestate on anything and everything we may like to cherish; contrasting viewpoints well settled; I liked.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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This speaks fire may cremate anything and everything and ideas can gestate on anything and everything we may like to cherish; contrasting viewpoints well settled; I liked.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thanks for reading and critique zanya