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Comment from Y. M. Roger
I think Manny might like some octo-pie!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
I think Manny might like some octo-pie!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Manny had squid tarts.
Comment from nomi338
Whoa, that is some ugly looking sea food. Kind of looks like something from those Alien movies. I would not be at all surprised if they started bursting out of some fisherman's chest.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
Whoa, that is some ugly looking sea food. Kind of looks like something from those Alien movies. I would not be at all surprised if they started bursting out of some fisherman's chest.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you, nomi, for the alternate visualization.
Comment from BeasPeas
You are toooooo much. This is so funny. So we have gone from spiders to octopi (?)
Great job with this amusing short poem and picture. "Enzo and Otto" hanging out with Manny. Marilyn
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
You are toooooo much. This is so funny. So we have gone from spiders to octopi (?)
Great job with this amusing short poem and picture. "Enzo and Otto" hanging out with Manny. Marilyn
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thanks, Marilyn, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a very cute and cool 5-7-5 poem you have penned about the two octopus hanging out together. lol You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
Bill, This is a very cute and cool 5-7-5 poem you have penned about the two octopus hanging out together. lol You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Teri, for reviewing this.
Comment from Ulla
Hahahahah, Bill, yet another wonderful 5-7-5 about the octopus. Yeah, you could say it's literally hanging out with its friend. Love it. Great picture. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
Hahahahah, Bill, yet another wonderful 5-7-5 about the octopus. Yeah, you could say it's literally hanging out with its friend. Love it. Great picture. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from damommy
It looks like Manny could make them more comfortable. Some friend.
This is delightful. You always make me laugh. 8-) Enzo and Otto. Hahahahahaha
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
It looks like Manny could make them more comfortable. Some friend.
This is delightful. You always make me laugh. 8-) Enzo and Otto. Hahahahahaha
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thanks, da