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Comment from Y. M. Roger
The sad, sad ending to Tarantula, Beyond Spiderdome...!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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The sad, sad ending to Tarantula, Beyond Spiderdome...!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill. It's wonderful and you do make me laugh as always. Yes I can imagine it all too vividly. I hate spiders, although I do realise they do some good work. I loved your poem with so great imagery. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Hi Bill. It's wonderful and you do make me laugh as always. Yes I can imagine it all too vividly. I hate spiders, although I do realise they do some good work. I loved your poem with so great imagery. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Ulla, for the great review. Bill
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Thank you, Ulla, for the great review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
While it cannot be argued that spiders serve a good cause in that they dispose of some other pests. Just try that argument on a wife, girlfriend or daughter who just finished freaking out at the very sight of an eight legged monster who was spied from across the room. When they order you to get rid of it, that is exactly what you had better do.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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While it cannot be argued that spiders serve a good cause in that they dispose of some other pests. Just try that argument on a wife, girlfriend or daughter who just finished freaking out at the very sight of an eight legged monster who was spied from across the room. When they order you to get rid of it, that is exactly what you had better do.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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Thanks, nomi
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Bill. I'm enjoying your spider series. I think you're getting really into it and the poems are better and better, very amusing as you progress. Poor Arachnid Rex (great name). Poor guy! Cough, choke! There is fantastic alliteration of "w" in this line: "his webbed world would wither now"
Marilyn
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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Hi Bill. I'm enjoying your spider series. I think you're getting really into it and the poems are better and better, very amusing as you progress. Poor Arachnid Rex (great name). Poor guy! Cough, choke! There is fantastic alliteration of "w" in this line: "his webbed world would wither now"
Marilyn
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
Thanks, Marilyn
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a very cute poem about the pesky spider. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I am not too fond of spiders of any kind. They make me itch! lol Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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Bill, This is a very cute poem about the pesky spider. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I am not too fond of spiders of any kind. They make me itch! lol Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
Thanks, Teri
Comment from damommy
Poor Rex. He was only doing his job. I know a lot of people don't like spiders. I don't, either, when they get on me, but I usually leave webs alone. The intricacy of such a beautiful thing is hard to wipe out.
No, my house isn't filled with spider webs. I meant outdoors, of courses. I do remove the live spider, if possible, to the outside.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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Poor Rex. He was only doing his job. I know a lot of people don't like spiders. I don't, either, when they get on me, but I usually leave webs alone. The intricacy of such a beautiful thing is hard to wipe out.
No, my house isn't filled with spider webs. I meant outdoors, of courses. I do remove the live spider, if possible, to the outside.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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Thanks, da. I am sure spiders would do the same if our roles were reversed.
Comment from chcbeck
A well written poem, great flow and witty too. I love the image chosen it really brings your words to life.
Cobwebs a pain to get rid of but looking closely at them they are intricate.a spiders lifes work. Great read thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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A well written poem, great flow and witty too. I love the image chosen it really brings your words to life.
Cobwebs a pain to get rid of but looking closely at them they are intricate.a spiders lifes work. Great read thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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Thanks, chcbeck.
Comment from Cybertron1986
A pleasant and entertaining read. I enjoyed the witty personification of the spider, and what, if spiders were people, they would be concerned about "the cloud of death."
Your piece exhibited a smooth rhythmic flow, which made the read from start to finish an inviting read.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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A pleasant and entertaining read. I enjoyed the witty personification of the spider, and what, if spiders were people, they would be concerned about "the cloud of death."
Your piece exhibited a smooth rhythmic flow, which made the read from start to finish an inviting read.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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Thanks, Cy.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written pair of prankas about spider world. Spiders are actually our friends but we constantly wipe their webs away that they use to catch flies and other small insects.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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A very well-written pair of prankas about spider world. Spiders are actually our friends but we constantly wipe their webs away that they use to catch flies and other small insects.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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Thanks, Sandra.
Comment from Poetic Friend
Creepy, Bill. I don't like spiders. Well, who does?
Your poem was well-written, and you have utilized many poetic devices -- alliteration, personification, internal rhymes and imagery.
There is a tongue twister in this line "webbed world would wither now."
Impressive!
How are you enjoying retirement?
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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Creepy, Bill. I don't like spiders. Well, who does?
Your poem was well-written, and you have utilized many poetic devices -- alliteration, personification, internal rhymes and imagery.
There is a tongue twister in this line "webbed world would wither now."
Impressive!
How are you enjoying retirement?
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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Thanks, PF, for the excellent review. Retirement seems busy. Bill