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Comment from Bill Schott
I remember this style from years ago. I need a half-dozen readings to infer anything steady. I guess I get the sense that we have and enjoy an America that follows our own personal virtues. It is like an old friend with flaws and favors alike. Good to see you on the radar again.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
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I remember this style from years ago. I need a half-dozen readings to infer anything steady. I guess I get the sense that we have and enjoy an America that follows our own personal virtues. It is like an old friend with flaws and favors alike. Good to see you on the radar again.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
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Yeah that about sums Our prodigal way in the weirdness...everybody creates and designs they're own gods of personal reflection. Instead of uniting under the banner of their Benefactor and continuing in prosperity...some bellow give US someone else to follow. Same old song and dance nobody ever learns. Smile...appreciate your time. Love Michael
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
Wow-what a presentation, love the picture, love Bruce. Never saw a presentation like yours, excellent. What a wonderful tribute to our wonderful country. I'm sure you have a winner there.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
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Wow-what a presentation, love the picture, love Bruce. Never saw a presentation like yours, excellent. What a wonderful tribute to our wonderful country. I'm sure you have a winner there.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
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Well wow yourself Miss Taylor you've never looked more stunning in gold...smile...ah I wrote it a long time ago...just seemed appropriate for the hour. I thank you for open support. Love Michael
Comment from amada
I like your soulful affirmations and your passion, dear Michael. I like what you say in here. Today I celebrate to be part of this great and blessed country. Best wishes.
Watching the movie :"1776..."
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I like your soulful affirmations and your passion, dear Michael. I like what you say in here. Today I celebrate to be part of this great and blessed country. Best wishes.
Watching the movie :"1776..."
Comment Written 05-Jul-2017
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for your timely, thought-provoking poem during this long, holiday weekend of celebration. Your "orphaned porridge" metaphor is unforgettable and your animated artwork selection is just right. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your timely, thought-provoking poem during this long, holiday weekend of celebration. Your "orphaned porridge" metaphor is unforgettable and your animated artwork selection is just right. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 04-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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O my God have you ever tasted it...sigh...to die for. yummy -benthandintheair-....O Joany its so good to see you girlfriend...kiss kiss, love Michael
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I often eat oatmeal and groats, which are supposed to be good for us--I top them with yogurt and cinnamon. It only takes 5 minutes in the microwave. Smiles- Joan
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no way J, I cant stand gyro...not a goat man I'm afraid. I was raised like and on cattle...well whenever oppertunity could afford...child protective services being camera happy and always trying to capture posterity's child before he died...aha...ah just kidding-
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You had me going--thanks for letting me know you were kidding. Sweet dreams- Joan
Comment from Thal1959
In dire need of punctuation. The endlessly stitched lines run into each other until the "imagined" sentences in the reader's mind become non-sensical. As the writer, regardless of your artistic ambitions for a piece, it is your responsibility to guide the reader through a work. Total absence of punctuation leaves the reader clueless.
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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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In dire need of punctuation. The endlessly stitched lines run into each other until the "imagined" sentences in the reader's mind become non-sensical. As the writer, regardless of your artistic ambitions for a piece, it is your responsibility to guide the reader through a work. Total absence of punctuation leaves the reader clueless.
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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well it aint cabbages and kings thats for sure...its MY poetic expression that which you wont have to worry about anymore...I wouldnt want to stretch a clueless imagination.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the rights of passage to the nation and her politics and political philosophical decisions in activation and rediscovering the Americans; I liked.
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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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This speaks about the rights of passage to the nation and her politics and political philosophical decisions in activation and rediscovering the Americans; I liked.
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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yes indeed it speaks to me too...appreciate your headnod. love Michael
