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Comment from Pearl Edwards
Like the formation poem and then the big drop, yukkeee.
Great name for the school teacher Miss Stern Lecture. This is a good continuation mikey on Deb's fantasy theme.
cheers,
valda
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Like the formation poem and then the big drop, yukkeee.
Great name for the school teacher Miss Stern Lecture. This is a good continuation mikey on Deb's fantasy theme.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Michael,
The adventures of Pepe go on... hehehe... I love his name. Poor little fellow, lost in the big world with hunters shooting at him. Good job, honey.
Gypsy hugs
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Hello, Michael,
The adventures of Pepe go on... hehehe... I love his name. Poor little fellow, lost in the big world with hunters shooting at him. Good job, honey.
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
Comment from Rubylou
Just prior to Miss Stern Lecture's entrance:
-Billy comes upon (a) (the) rundown schoolhouse? just a thought.
I am enjoying the fun story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Where have Billy and Nancy gone off to? Hummm
Again, great characters. I love 'Soup Dejour'.
Rubylou
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Just prior to Miss Stern Lecture's entrance:
-Billy comes upon (a) (the) rundown schoolhouse? just a thought.
I am enjoying the fun story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Where have Billy and Nancy gone off to? Hummm
Again, great characters. I love 'Soup Dejour'.
Rubylou
Comment Written 04-Jul-2017
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Well, Mikey, there is a question about whether or not this is fantasy. To me, it could easily be factual, having become familiar with the writer. In any case, the story is delightful so perhaps I can forgive the uncertain basis and just congratulate you on a job well done. Looking forward to more of the adventures of Pepe, forgive my humour, Giddy
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Well, Mikey, there is a question about whether or not this is fantasy. To me, it could easily be factual, having become familiar with the writer. In any case, the story is delightful so perhaps I can forgive the uncertain basis and just congratulate you on a job well done. Looking forward to more of the adventures of Pepe, forgive my humour, Giddy
Comment Written 04-Jul-2017
Comment from apky
I don't know if you deliberately wanted to spell the "you're" below like you did. But I've corrected it anyway.
Pepe
I thought you're(your) sign was meant to amuse ... I ah ... I'm sorry, I didn't mean to anger you. Your shell is amazing. I had no idea they came in such dazzling colours ... anyway, I meant no harm.
I continue to enjoy the story.
Cheers,
Apky
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I don't know if you deliberately wanted to spell the "you're" below like you did. But I've corrected it anyway.
Pepe
I thought you're(your) sign was meant to amuse ... I ah ... I'm sorry, I didn't mean to anger you. Your shell is amazing. I had no idea they came in such dazzling colours ... anyway, I meant no harm.
I continue to enjoy the story.
Cheers,
Apky
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hurrah! The duck isn't dead. But, he's certainly no closer to home, is he? It looks like he is off a a merry adventure with the multi-colored turtle in tow.
Looking forward to more,
~patty~
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Hurrah! The duck isn't dead. But, he's certainly no closer to home, is he? It looks like he is off a a merry adventure with the multi-colored turtle in tow.
Looking forward to more,
~patty~
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm glad Billy and Nancy escaped. I doubt the teacher would have let them search for Pepe. I can't wait for more.
The turtle snaps his head and feet inside his shell and a 'gone fishin' sign pops out the rear. (cute and creative)
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I'm glad Billy and Nancy escaped. I doubt the teacher would have let them search for Pepe. I can't wait for more.
The turtle snaps his head and feet inside his shell and a 'gone fishin' sign pops out the rear. (cute and creative)
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Mikey,
This is certainly unfolding to be some sort of a fantasy, with an orange duck and all. Hopefully he won't become duck dinner before he's found by Billy and Nancy.
A duck and a turtle... what could happen next?
Kim
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Hi Mikey,
This is certainly unfolding to be some sort of a fantasy, with an orange duck and all. Hopefully he won't become duck dinner before he's found by Billy and Nancy.
A duck and a turtle... what could happen next?
Kim
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! I love your character's names: Miss Stern Lecture and Nancy Pants. Cute story. Didn't much care the poop-squirting part, but it fit well and helped the little orange duck get away. :)
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LOL! I love your character's names: Miss Stern Lecture and Nancy Pants. Cute story. Didn't much care the poop-squirting part, but it fit well and helped the little orange duck get away. :)
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
LOL Nancy Pants. I kept it together till I reached that but I did find myself singing the song.lol A nice continuation for the challange
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LOL Nancy Pants. I kept it together till I reached that but I did find myself singing the song.lol A nice continuation for the challange
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2017