Unwanted Dog
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Chase"A short autobiography
16 total reviews
Comment from emptypage
Reading in reverse, I guess. Another great, action-packed chapter. Can't wait to see more.
I guess I can go to your profile to catch up? I will. I gotta know how all this came to be.
I'm female, but it sounds like we might have some similar experiences and attitudes.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Reading in reverse, I guess. Another great, action-packed chapter. Can't wait to see more.
I guess I can go to your profile to catch up? I will. I gotta know how all this came to be.
I'm female, but it sounds like we might have some similar experiences and attitudes.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Glad you are enjoying my autobiography.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and write a review.
Comment from bookishfabler
I somehow missed this. I remember the beginning. I think I may have started it and got distracted by something. I am loving your story.
Finally, Officer Smalley returned with a pack of Lance's peanut butter crackers from a vending machine, and a single Styrofoam cup of lukewarm water. They were what he called dinner. Hungrily, I gobbled the unbroken crackers. (some dinner)
hugs Heidi
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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I somehow missed this. I remember the beginning. I think I may have started it and got distracted by something. I am loving your story.
Finally, Officer Smalley returned with a pack of Lance's peanut butter crackers from a vending machine, and a single Styrofoam cup of lukewarm water. They were what he called dinner. Hungrily, I gobbled the unbroken crackers. (some dinner)
hugs Heidi
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from LaRosa
Your seemingly terrifying story is told with such humor, and 'clean-ness' . I love it.
You 'didn't last a hot minute'. Amazing how time flies when you're having fun. :)
I didn't hold it against him...oh, yes I did!
It's exactly how a person really things. You have it down to an art.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Your seemingly terrifying story is told with such humor, and 'clean-ness' . I love it.
You 'didn't last a hot minute'. Amazing how time flies when you're having fun. :)
I didn't hold it against him...oh, yes I did!
It's exactly how a person really things. You have it down to an art.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Much more to come and I invite you along for the ride.
Comment from patcelaw
Brett, my heart aches for young people who are placed in homes like Heritage Hall. I have never been arrested by police an, but I have had to be in lock up for my own protection because of manic depression/ Being in that hospital with have to have employees open and close all the doors made the place feel like prison. Just months ago I once again had to be in the hospital and it has gotten even worse. Keep writing and telling your story. You are an excellent writer and I am enjoying reading your true story. Blessings, Patricia
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Brett, my heart aches for young people who are placed in homes like Heritage Hall. I have never been arrested by police an, but I have had to be in lock up for my own protection because of manic depression/ Being in that hospital with have to have employees open and close all the doors made the place feel like prison. Just months ago I once again had to be in the hospital and it has gotten even worse. Keep writing and telling your story. You are an excellent writer and I am enjoying reading your true story. Blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Glad you are enjoying my autobiography.
Much more to come and I invite you along for the ride.
Never good dealing with issues such as depression, being in an orphanage, or the such.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Brett,
This is a great chapter. The action flows naturally & you did a great job describing how you fled for the officers only to be caught.
Question:
Why did you capitalize senior [near the top] Senior citizen?
Thanks for sharing. I am eagerly looking forward to the Wal-Mart chapter. Jan
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Brett,
This is a great chapter. The action flows naturally & you did a great job describing how you fled for the officers only to be caught.
Question:
Why did you capitalize senior [near the top] Senior citizen?
Thanks for sharing. I am eagerly looking forward to the Wal-Mart chapter. Jan
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Wal-Mart will be coming soon.
Comment from Anio
So we venture on. I know what it's like to be in a lock-up, I'm sorry to say. There, it's out, don't tell anyone, I'll fictionalize it and post it :) The chase so well written it really takes you along - I was also a long distance runner as a teen, so it's a good write for me. Can't wait for the next instalment. Glad he wasn't frisked - now way Jose, not back There!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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So we venture on. I know what it's like to be in a lock-up, I'm sorry to say. There, it's out, don't tell anyone, I'll fictionalize it and post it :) The chase so well written it really takes you along - I was also a long distance runner as a teen, so it's a good write for me. Can't wait for the next instalment. Glad he wasn't frisked - now way Jose, not back There!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Much more to come and I do invite you to ride along.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Brett; you described the 'chase' scene well, and it was hard to feel the frustration of being caught. I certainly hope they have somewhere better to take you than Hermitage Hall - but that might be too much to hope for,
~patty~
Congrats on your third place finish for Book of The Month for June
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Hi Brett; you described the 'chase' scene well, and it was hard to feel the frustration of being caught. I certainly hope they have somewhere better to take you than Hermitage Hall - but that might be too much to hope for,
~patty~
Congrats on your third place finish for Book of The Month for June
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Much more to come and I invite you to ride along.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
Your story was interesting to read and I enjoyed it very much. The picture that Eileen0204 let you use was nice to see too. I'll be looking
for more of you work.
Kat
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Hi Brett,
Your story was interesting to read and I enjoyed it very much. The picture that Eileen0204 let you use was nice to see too. I'll be looking
for more of you work.
Kat
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
I thought the picture of horses racing was appropriate for a "chase"..
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Hi Brett,
Yes the picture of the horses racing worked very well.
Kat
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This section of the piece is very well done and no problems noted. Quite amazing the way you take us into the story and seem to watch what happens
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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This section of the piece is very well done and no problems noted. Quite amazing the way you take us into the story and seem to watch what happens
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Sankey
Hot chapter, mate. You did so well for so long. I am hoping something new is ahead and a new way of you getting free, once again. Only one little suggestion.... I was trapped to my own (de)vices.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Hot chapter, mate. You did so well for so long. I am hoping something new is ahead and a new way of you getting free, once again. Only one little suggestion.... I was trapped to my own (de)vices.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Appreciate the spag catch too.