Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Eeeewww.... psychedelic sh**!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 17-May-2020

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reply by the author on 17-May-2020

Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (Hippie turds. Ha ha ha. I crack myself up.)

Comment from Jay Squires

Exceptional

Wow! Here's another example of the profundity that just seems to roll off your mind, without fanfare. It made me laugh, I mean laugh heartily, Bill.

A hippy, the symbol of everything pseudo-free, leaves his turd that a fly lays her eggs in and on. Then the fly, or one of her progeny gets eaten by the spider, who slips, naturally as a Bill Schott poem, into hallucinogenic bliss.

Damn but that's good! And now I can reward it!

Jay

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017

Jay, your reviews are always so positive and articulate that I feel like I'm getting somewhere. I appreciate the time you take with even the oddest of work. Thank you for the secstellular rating. Bill

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Contact highs can be the worse as they many times are unexpected. You go about your business not expecting to feel anything outside the norm and then all of a sudden you are tripping hard and wondering how in the world did this happen.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017

Thanks, nomi, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Talk about a chain reaction--the hippie ate the MJ-laced brownies, the fly ate the hippie poops, the spider ate the fly. It took some thinking to get to the point of the poem. An enjoyable offbeat read with good illustration and sticking to your spider theme. Marilyn

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017

Thanks, Marilyn. Later on an old lady swallowed the spider, which wiggled and giggled and tickled inside her.

reply by BeasPeas on 03-Jul-2017

LOL! You are tooooooo much!

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the world of the spider that is so complex; the spider is here more complex in struggling for survival even after routine activities creating web for the prey gets more complex; I liked.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017

Thanks, ALD

Comment from damommy

Excellent

That will teach him to be more careful about what he eats.

Can you imagine a spider being on a high with all those eyes? LOL

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017

Thanks,da, for the neat review. Bill

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hahahahaha, Bill, this is hilarious. I don't like spiders at the best of times but this made me feel almost, the operative word being almost, sorry for it. Great writing. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017

Thanks, Ulla

Comment from Number11

Excellent

I laughed out loud at this one! I wasn't expecting it and BAM hit me on the head. I'd like to read more humor pieces from you! The end was nasty and made me slightly uncomfortable but thats what made me laugh so loud

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017

Thanks, #11

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Very funny, Bill. You have a good mix in your writing. Some humor and some drama. It shows how talented you are. You're one of my favorite authors on FanStory.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017

Thanks, Thomas. The feeling is mutual.