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Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Spider World 4"Animal poetry and short stories
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Gonna get it all in your hair... everywhere!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Gonna get it all in your hair... everywhere!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (At least he wore gloves.)
Comment from nomi338
Better be careful, you would add a nice pattern to the mosaic that the filter presents. Someone seeing the potential might be tempted to make you a permanent part of the picture.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Better be careful, you would add a nice pattern to the mosaic that the filter presents. Someone seeing the potential might be tempted to make you a permanent part of the picture.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Thanks, nomi, for reviewing this. Bill
Comment from damommy
Send him over to my house. I frequently forget to change filters until they're covered up. I changed them yesterday, so he doesn't need to be here 'til next month. LOL
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Send him over to my house. I frequently forget to change filters until they're covered up. I changed them yesterday, so he doesn't need to be here 'til next month. LOL
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thanks, da. He's on his way.
Comment from jaded831
No holding back with this poem. We write to let us speak our mind, you did just that. Easy flow, very easy to understand, and easy to relate to. Especially if you own your own home. I live in an apartment now, but I did own my own home once.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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No holding back with this poem. We write to let us speak our mind, you did just that. Easy flow, very easy to understand, and easy to relate to. Especially if you own your own home. I live in an apartment now, but I did own my own home once.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thanks, jaded, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Sis Cat
Yes, yuck, I hate cleaning filters bit it has to be done. Bill. this is a fine poem that describes the drudgery and the mess of one of the least loved chores. I love your use of casual conversation to pull the reader in, but not to clean the trap! Yes, do wash your hands afterwards. I am reminded of when I cleaned the gunk from my tub drain. Yuck.
Thank you for sharing your humorous poem.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Yes, yuck, I hate cleaning filters bit it has to be done. Bill. this is a fine poem that describes the drudgery and the mess of one of the least loved chores. I love your use of casual conversation to pull the reader in, but not to clean the trap! Yes, do wash your hands afterwards. I am reminded of when I cleaned the gunk from my tub drain. Yuck.
Thank you for sharing your humorous poem.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thanks for giving this some credibility.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. This is an interesting poem and something different. The artwork is perfect and compliments your poetry. The title is catchy and unique. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Excellent. This is an interesting poem and something different. The artwork is perfect and compliments your poetry. The title is catchy and unique. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thanks, PBB