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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Horse World 10"Animal poetry and short stories
10 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Ass-kissin' being one of them...!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Ass-kissin' being one of them...!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (Who lost the toss?)
Comment from Gloria ....
LOL, this is a cute one too, Bill. I haven't ever made a horse like this but I can imagine it has its ups and downs.
Another fine addition to your book and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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LOL, this is a cute one too, Bill. I haven't ever made a horse like this but I can imagine it has its ups and downs.
Another fine addition to your book and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you, Gloria. This is a job where you want to be the head.
Comment from Ulla
Hahahaha, so true, Bill. Just don't know where you get these wonderful gems from. I love it. I hope you will continue this funny horse adventure. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017
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Hahahaha, so true, Bill. Just don't know where you get these wonderful gems from. I love it. I hope you will continue this funny horse adventure. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 30-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017
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I'm onto spiders, Ulla.
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Whack! Not my cup of tea. Not your poems but spiders. Can't stand them.
Comment from nomi338
This is obviously a horse of a different color. One might even call it a dark horse. Not that imposing as a mighty steed or stallion. Still it has it own certain charm. However I would hesitate to try and straddle the back of this exotic mount, as something horrible and catastrophic might very well occur on the attempt. better to view this one from a safe distance, avoiding its rear lest you get mistaken for its twin.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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This is obviously a horse of a different color. One might even call it a dark horse. Not that imposing as a mighty steed or stallion. Still it has it own certain charm. However I would hesitate to try and straddle the back of this exotic mount, as something horrible and catastrophic might very well occur on the attempt. better to view this one from a safe distance, avoiding its rear lest you get mistaken for its twin.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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Thanks, nomi, for the warning.
Comment from Teri7
lol This is just too cute and I love the wording and the picture you used. I don't think I want to become a horse this way or any other way. Very good wording and imagery. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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lol This is just too cute and I love the wording and the picture you used. I don't think I want to become a horse this way or any other way. Very good wording and imagery. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 29-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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Thanks, Teri
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you are so welcome!
Comment from BOO ghost
Aha! very funny. reminds me of the Craig Ferguson show. Had a Craig Kilborne show too but the Ferguson show had a horse in it. yep, I would hate to be the rear horse, of course. Yep, do you own horses? Thanks for the show. BOO-fiffic!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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Aha! very funny. reminds me of the Craig Ferguson show. Had a Craig Kilborne show too but the Ferguson show had a horse in it. yep, I would hate to be the rear horse, of course. Yep, do you own horses? Thanks for the show. BOO-fiffic!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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Thanks, BOO, for the great review. Bill
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A pleasure, Bill. Take care.
Comment from Jay Squires
Your humor always comes so smoothly, Bill. "Becoming a horse" of course carries two meanings: 1) Becoming a real horse, and is carried forward in meaning with "just takes time" (which can mean the normal horse + horse process), before the mind takes a bend when it reads "and two people" leads to, 2) becoming the cloth horse. The original double meaning the mind is given, though, creates the poetic tension (even in a humorous poem).
I love how you do this, Bill. Wish I had a six to trade for my 2 cents! LOL, it's a worthy read.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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Your humor always comes so smoothly, Bill. "Becoming a horse" of course carries two meanings: 1) Becoming a real horse, and is carried forward in meaning with "just takes time" (which can mean the normal horse + horse process), before the mind takes a bend when it reads "and two people" leads to, 2) becoming the cloth horse. The original double meaning the mind is given, though, creates the poetic tension (even in a humorous poem).
I love how you do this, Bill. Wish I had a six to trade for my 2 cents! LOL, it's a worthy read.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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Thanks, Jay. I think I owe you some change for this superior review. Bill
Comment from lyenochka
LOL. I didn't know what to expect with the title or the picture. But okay, the syllable count works and the coordination of two people is required to become "a horse."
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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LOL. I didn't know what to expect with the title or the picture. But okay, the syllable count works and the coordination of two people is required to become "a horse."
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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Thank, lyenochka, for giving this a look. Bill
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Thanks for all your great reviews, Bill!
Comment from damommy
Oh, what a hoot. LOL
Let's play horse. I'll be the head and you just be yourself. hahahahahaha. You walked right into that one.
Love these horse worlds. 8-)
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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Oh, what a hoot. LOL
Let's play horse. I'll be the head and you just be yourself. hahahahahaha. You walked right into that one.
Love these horse worlds. 8-)
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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Thanks, da.
Comment from Mustang Patty
LOL! Thank you for sharing this humorous look at the 'horse' and the act of becoming one. I enjoyed the poem very much. Well done.
~patty~
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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LOL! Thank you for sharing this humorous look at the 'horse' and the act of becoming one. I enjoyed the poem very much. Well done.
~patty~
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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Thanks, Patty