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Comment from Joan E.
I admired your emotional poem and dramatic presentation. I don't know Judi Marie but she should be proud to have helped to inspire this piece. Your alliterative "f's" and "s's" are very effective and the "slit wrists of plagiarists" conveys unforgettable sounds and images. Wow! -Joan
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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I admired your emotional poem and dramatic presentation. I don't know Judi Marie but she should be proud to have helped to inspire this piece. Your alliterative "f's" and "s's" are very effective and the "slit wrists of plagiarists" conveys unforgettable sounds and images. Wow! -Joan
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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she's a very special lil' girl...a one and only in love's eyes.
Thanks J....you anoint me with pure nard whenever you come around.
i'm spoiled. love Michael
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You deserve to be spoiled! Hugs- Joan
Comment from MissMerri
This poem addresses a mother's most painful heartbreak... a daughter lost to her. Perhaps the reasons don't matter, nor would it matter if the reasons are completely unknown, the pain is as deep and the wound as raw. Somehow you've captured these unfathomable emotions miraculously in this sad poem. I could not read it without tears, and the amazing video is so beautifully reflective of the emotions described. Thank you for painting my deepest heart in your empathetic colors. I am deeply moved and most grateful for this tender expression of love and caring. I especially love the final stanza... and that last line says it all. Wow! You amaze. Six stars is hardly enough.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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This poem addresses a mother's most painful heartbreak... a daughter lost to her. Perhaps the reasons don't matter, nor would it matter if the reasons are completely unknown, the pain is as deep and the wound as raw. Somehow you've captured these unfathomable emotions miraculously in this sad poem. I could not read it without tears, and the amazing video is so beautifully reflective of the emotions described. Thank you for painting my deepest heart in your empathetic colors. I am deeply moved and most grateful for this tender expression of love and caring. I especially love the final stanza... and that last line says it all. Wow! You amaze. Six stars is hardly enough.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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you cant know a Temple until you've heard her prayers.
it is mine that she hear now. Always my Meadow...I'm Michael.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about love and state and status of love that God in His infinite creations has willingly gifted to man the best of His Creation; I think the theme is yet to be understood.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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This speaks about love and state and status of love that God in His infinite creations has willingly gifted to man the best of His Creation; I think the theme is yet to be understood.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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yes its about ...ah well its about a closeness, a shared completeness. its about how wonderful,how overwhelming beautiful love chosen is. thanks. love Michael
Comment from Ricky1024
"Sounds painful Michael.
"Perhaps people that have passed from dire circumstances?"
"I too went that route after losing my Son and wife."
"It most definitely is a learning experience and not recommended."
Note:
"Well written and deep in theme as well as Imagery."
"Liked the Depth. Flow, Grammar, Objective And Adjective Contents,
were all sufficient and amazing...
Thanks,
Ricky1024.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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"Sounds painful Michael.
"Perhaps people that have passed from dire circumstances?"
"I too went that route after losing my Son and wife."
"It most definitely is a learning experience and not recommended."
Note:
"Well written and deep in theme as well as Imagery."
"Liked the Depth. Flow, Grammar, Objective And Adjective Contents,
were all sufficient and amazing...
Thanks,
Ricky1024.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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you didnt lose them Ricky...
you're just separated for sometime...you'll see again your love in their eyes. keep the faith clean. keep making them proud. love Michael