Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

That expression says 'not very mixed'...!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 17-May-2020

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reply by the author on 17-May-2020

Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (Feed it shredded wheat.)

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

This is definitely a tiny horse, for tiny people, or at least so says Jonathan Swift. And yes mixed feelings is exactly how a recipient of such a lovely gift would feel.

Great job and another excellent chapter in your book. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 16-May-2020

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reply by the author on 16-May-2020

Thank you, Gloria

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting 5-7-5 poem you have penned. I remember that story of Gulliver's Travels with Lilliput in it. Very good descriptive wording and art work. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

Thanks, Teri

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, I'm late as ever, but I want to catch up on everybody's writing and I'm nearly there. Then I have 120 reviews to answer, Fancy that!
This is a great continuation to the story. No wonder she's a little miffed if she'd expected a real size pony. Go figure. I liked it a lot. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017

Thanks, Ulla, for the fun review. Bill

Comment from Nika2016

Exceptional

No problem...get a tiny man to ride him...I always wanted one to carry in my pocket...:)
Funny gets a six again...
Keep them
coming.........Make us
laugh! Filled up this box...

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017

Thank you, Niki, for the exceptional review. Bill

Comment from BOO ghost

Excellent

The picture is colorful. Very nice. The colored words fit the picture and theme. yeah, has metamorphic meaning too. you chose words carefully and fits the puzzle somehow. yeah, like it, the miniature people and world like land Of The Giants. You got special magic with words. Talented. BOO-riffic!

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017

Thank you, BOO, for the terrific review. Bill

reply by BOO ghost on 26-Jun-2017

Anytime bud. BOO is a friendly and generous ghost, awe, finally pumped out my second episode, I not written in over a year, I hope this chapter is better than the last. Ghosts get rusty and chains do too. Ha ha

Comment from bmethner

Excellent

Very creative. I am so glad you explained Lilliput. I had forgotten about it. The artwork is perfectly fit for the poem, and sends the imagination on a wild ride. (No pun intended). That Christmas gift would definitely leave you with mixed feeling. I enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017

Thanks, b, for giving this a look. Most people didn't cattch the Lilliput reference.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks diverse and distinct Lilliputian experience of a Lilliput horse from a Lilliput stable after being on an adventure; this is a metaphoric use of a horse; I liked.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017

Thanks, ALD

Comment from damommy

Excellent

I like the Lilliput stable line. It would be disappointing if she thought it would be a real one.

A friend one promised her teenager a car for Christmas. I thought it was cruel when he opened the package to find a model car.

I'm waiting for the "Horse World." The pressure's on. LOL

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017

Thanks, da. Horse World 7 will be up and running soon. Bill

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

This is somewhat like a man who finds himself with one of the worlds most beautiful women, unfortunately for him, she is a figurine, doll size and he is not. Hot, bitter tears of disappointment fill and flush his eyes.

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017

Thanks, nomi.