Through The Looking Glass
There's no escape!!18 total reviews
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is very good. It could be a Twilight Zone episode. It's similar to The Portrait of Dorian Gray. The mirror changes instead of the face. This could inspire a movie.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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This is very good. It could be a Twilight Zone episode. It's similar to The Portrait of Dorian Gray. The mirror changes instead of the face. This could inspire a movie.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much for your very encouraging review.
Hollywood, here I come!! : )
Comment from Hansel1
A powerful piece. Strongly showcasing the depths of self-reflection and the emotion it evokes. I started singing 'Secrets' by the romantics by the time I finished the last line - Cheers!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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A powerful piece. Strongly showcasing the depths of self-reflection and the emotion it evokes. I started singing 'Secrets' by the romantics by the time I finished the last line - Cheers!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Haha.. thank you so much. Did you mean 'talking in your sleep' by the romantics? Not that I know much about them but I have heard of that one.
I appreciate your time and comments : )
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello friend I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem for the contest. I think that this will do well in the contest. Good luck to you. I love the structure and the flow of this. And the imagery is great thank you very much for sharing this. God bless you. Love Lala
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Hello friend I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem for the contest. I think that this will do well in the contest. Good luck to you. I love the structure and the flow of this. And the imagery is great thank you very much for sharing this. God bless you. Love Lala
Comment Written 24-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment in such an encouraging way : )
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and it went well with the imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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This is a very well written poem for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and it went well with the imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much : )
Comment from Ricky1024
See What You See in the Mirror Contest.
This appears to be a winner.
Nice theme and Imagery.
Comes with a warning in the end.
Adjective Content was excellent.
Flowed well but a little hard to see on a lap top.
Good luck with this.
Ricky1024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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See What You See in the Mirror Contest.
This appears to be a winner.
Nice theme and Imagery.
Comes with a warning in the end.
Adjective Content was excellent.
Flowed well but a little hard to see on a lap top.
Good luck with this.
Ricky1024
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much. I may change the background colour slightly. Thank you for bringing it to my attention: )
Comment from BlueTiger
Great work! The pace and rhythm of this poem works well, and it tells an interesting story. Nice creative take on the contest theme, I liked it a lot. Good luck!
-Blue
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Great work! The pace and rhythm of this poem works well, and it tells an interesting story. Nice creative take on the contest theme, I liked it a lot. Good luck!
-Blue
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Many thanks for your kind review : )
Comment from Paradox Tremors
Wow. Scary. Sometimes the mirror might show us a side of ourselves we wish to keep hidden from the prying eyes of the world. If we saw ourselves the way the world sees us, would we go crazy? Or just laugh? I'll probably go mad. An intense, thought-provoking piece of writing my friend. It leaves me wondering if there's a "monster" lying in wait for me if I took the chance of looking inward in myself. Love it!
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Wow. Scary. Sometimes the mirror might show us a side of ourselves we wish to keep hidden from the prying eyes of the world. If we saw ourselves the way the world sees us, would we go crazy? Or just laugh? I'll probably go mad. An intense, thought-provoking piece of writing my friend. It leaves me wondering if there's a "monster" lying in wait for me if I took the chance of looking inward in myself. Love it!
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging review : )
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks on account records or historic analytical feelings and emotions as well estimation of growing life in changes that the poet sees in the mirror; a truth teller; I liked.
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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This speaks on account records or historic analytical feelings and emotions as well estimation of growing life in changes that the poet sees in the mirror; a truth teller; I liked.
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for for your review. Much appreciated : )
