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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Think I'd rather the carrots...!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 17-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (Saddle for this one.)
Comment from Gloria ....
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Aw, such a cute photograph and yes horses always get the best stuff like apples and sugar cubes. lol

This is a great book, Bill and you are a brilliant marketer and author. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 16-May-2020


reply by the author on 16-May-2020
    Thank you, Gloria, for the kind review.
Comment from Teri7
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This is another very good 5-7-5 you have penned about the horse world. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with the picture! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017
    Thanks, Teri
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Bill so true. The ponies are adored by children and all the goodies are bestowed on the lovely pony. The saddle is for you. I love it. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
    Thanks, Ulla
Comment from nomi338
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Black Beauty loves to run. If you can harness enough control to mount his back then you can ride along as he runs like the wind, taking you to new heights. Enjoy the ride.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
    Thank you, nomi, for the inspiring thought. Bill
Comment from damommy
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I don't think he's happy about that at all. I don't blame him. The rest got treats and he has to carry people around.

I hope there are more of these to come. Very entertaining.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
    Thanks, da.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
    Thanks, da.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Oh yes my friend I enjoyed your 5/7/5 poem it is the little girl in the photograph is saying this to the horse well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
    Thanks, MHP.