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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, dear, shopping horses...!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Oh, dear, shopping horses...!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (Needs a hat.)
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, too funny. Now what about the points and cents? Did the horseshoes ever fit or were they just lucky horseshoes.
Great job with another fun poem, Bill. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Ha, too funny. Now what about the points and cents? Did the horseshoes ever fit or were they just lucky horseshoes.
Great job with another fun poem, Bill. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thank you, Gloria.
Comment from Teri7
Now I like this horse 5-7-5 you have penned. This is very good descriptive wording and fits the poem so well. Very good imagery with the picture of the horse. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017
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Now I like this horse 5-7-5 you have penned. This is very good descriptive wording and fits the poem so well. Very good imagery with the picture of the horse. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 30-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Ulla
Hahahaha, what are you like, Bill. I can see where you're coming from, though. hehe. Great poem. What a beautiful horse you've chosen for your poem. I've had many horses in my life. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Hahahaha, what are you like, Bill. I can see where you're coming from, though. hehe. Great poem. What a beautiful horse you've chosen for your poem. I've had many horses in my life. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from nomi338
Looks like a well dressed pony to me. No wonder he is strutting his stuff all about the barnyard. His mane is flowing freely, his coat is looking fine and his shoes appear to be polished, now all he needs to do is find a fine looking filly to make his day complete.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Looks like a well dressed pony to me. No wonder he is strutting his stuff all about the barnyard. His mane is flowing freely, his coat is looking fine and his shoes appear to be polished, now all he needs to do is find a fine looking filly to make his day complete.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Thanks for the input, nomi.
Comment from damommy
LOL. What an imagination.
You described it perfectly and with humor. Very clever.
I'm enjoying your horse stories. 8-)
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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LOL. What an imagination.
You described it perfectly and with humor. Very clever.
I'm enjoying your horse stories. 8-)
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Thanks, da. Bill
Comment from donforclearn
This poem is well written. It reflects the images are so cute. Horse's are wonderful animals that interact with human's very well. Thank you for sharing your work. It made the reader smile.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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This poem is well written. It reflects the images are so cute. Horse's are wonderful animals that interact with human's very well. Thank you for sharing your work. It made the reader smile.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Thanks, Don, for the excellent review. Bill