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What is the Truth?

Pondering on the existence of God

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Comment from JDRBAR
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Excellently written. However: ",Whether or not one lives for God's sake or for the sake of the human race,
in the end, a good and worthy life would have been led." True. But, what purpose of a good and worthy life if we don't get the reward promised to us for doing so. Without acceptance of Jesus, your perfect life is meaningless.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
    Thank you so much for your read and your comment. Not sure I agree. But, I value your opinion and am keeping an open mind. Our goodness, I believe, lives on in the lives of relatives and friends. So I don't consider one's life meaningless if one does not accept a supreme power.
Comment from Irish Rain
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Amen. I personally believe there is a God. I believe God lives inside each of us. That's where Jesus said Heaven was. I agree 100%. It's all about how you live your life. Wonderful, blessings...

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
    Thank you for the read and the comment. Much appreciated.
Comment from Caressa_08
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Congratulations on second place for your poem about God...And, yes do agree about the golden rule, and we all like, or most of us... to be treated with respect and dignity and we should allow the same to people in our lives, or "So whatever you wish that others would do to you, do also to them."

Caressa_08

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
    Thank you for your read and your comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem about God, What Is the Truth?, has a lot of philosophical input into what constitutes a belief system and having faith. Being a good person is a good start.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
    Thank you, sir for the read and the comment.
Comment from jaded831
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Extraordinary, I could not find one flaw, and totally agree with every word. Religion to me is following the rules of being a good person and not that of some church. I also believe something put us here.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
    Thank you for your read and your review. It is my belief that one does not need an institutional establishment to be a good person.
Comment from lalajovanoski
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Hello friend I really enjoyed reading this poem about God I think that this is a good entry for the writing prompt good alliteration throughout and very powerful and emotions are felt thank you very much for sharing

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
    And thank you for your read and your kind comments.
Comment from Gloria ....
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Wonderful poem. It's always a delight to ponder our origins but only as long as participants are willing to keep an open mind. I agree with you that the Golden Rule is still the simplest and purest guideline for good behaviour.

Great job and I wish you all the best in the contest.

Gloria

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
    Thank you for the read and the comments.
Comment from Curly Girly
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There is a scripture verse that tells us:
Your good works are as filthy rags in the sight of God.
No, being a good person is not entirely enough.
Seek and ye shall find.
Ask and it will be opened up to you.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
    Thank you for your comments and the read.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very interesting poem you have penned for the A Poem about God contest. You used very good descriptive wording and good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
    Thanks for the read and the kind comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about God. We do not know everything and if it is all true. We just need to trust what we learned and have faith. We have more to lose when we decide not to believe or have faith.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
    Thank you for your review and your comments.