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Comment from Y. M. Roger
It was the clowns fault!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
It was the clowns fault!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (Ronald was found in a Mc Manure pile)
Comment from Gloria ....
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Bill, I find this wee poem poem very well written. Your creativity is outdone only by your terrific penmanship and of course zany sense of humour. :))
Thanks for the share.
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Bill, I find this wee poem poem very well written. Your creativity is outdone only by your terrific penmanship and of course zany sense of humour. :))
Thanks for the share.
Gloria
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thank you, Gloria, for the nod to my penmanship. : )
Comment from Bill Pinder
Interesting horse poem about being bucked off going hunting I guess. Thanks for sharing your creativity in this animal series. Keep sharing your humor. Bill
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
Interesting horse poem about being bucked off going hunting I guess. Thanks for sharing your creativity in this animal series. Keep sharing your humor. Bill
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thanks for following, Bill
Comment from Ulla
Hahahaha, I loved it. I came late to this, but as I've reviewed the two prior ones I certainly wanted to comment on this one. So horse ran away and Ronald sot dead. What are you like! All best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
Hahahaha, I loved it. I came late to this, but as I've reviewed the two prior ones I certainly wanted to comment on this one. So horse ran away and Ronald sot dead. What are you like! All best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thanks, Ulla.
Comment from frogbook
That is an absolutely frightening picture. I am definitely on Chet's side but sorry to hear he disappeared also. Lol. Great effort you have here, Bill. Much enjoyed.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
That is an absolutely frightening picture. I am definitely on Chet's side but sorry to hear he disappeared also. Lol. Great effort you have here, Bill. Much enjoyed.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thanks, FB
Comment from nomi338
I don't blame Chet at all. Who the heck wants some clown riding on their back? Back off Ronald McDonald! Get off my back, you hamburger hack! No, no, no, you can't ride me another day. Read my lips, no free rides!
Thanks I feel better now.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
I don't blame Chet at all. Who the heck wants some clown riding on their back? Back off Ronald McDonald! Get off my back, you hamburger hack! No, no, no, you can't ride me another day. Read my lips, no free rides!
Thanks I feel better now.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Only Chet knows what happened to Ronny Mac.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Bill Schott what in the world does Ronald the Clown think he is the Lone Ranger no wonder the horse(chet) wanted to Buck Ronald off
Good humor
Gert
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
Hi Bill Schott what in the world does Ronald the Clown think he is the Lone Ranger no wonder the horse(chet) wanted to Buck Ronald off
Good humor
Gert
Comment Written 21-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Thanks, Gert.
Comment from damommy
Hahahaha. Oh, stop! I'm laughing too hard.
I don't blame Chet. Ronald looks ridiculous on the horse. Hopefully, Chet will come home soon. LOL
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
Hahahaha. Oh, stop! I'm laughing too hard.
I don't blame Chet. Ronald looks ridiculous on the horse. Hopefully, Chet will come home soon. LOL
Comment Written 21-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Thanks, da. Wonder where Ronald went?
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Who cares? LOL
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned. Looks like Ronald is changing from clown to cowboy! lol Very good wording and great imagery. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
This is a very cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned. Looks like Ronald is changing from clown to cowboy! lol Very good wording and great imagery. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Thanks, Teri, for the neat review. Bill
Comment from sharonlshelley
like this good sense of honour, loved the choice of picture, really enjoyed reading this, i am just getting the hang of the syllable poetry thanks for sharing
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
like this good sense of honour, loved the choice of picture, really enjoyed reading this, i am just getting the hang of the syllable poetry thanks for sharing
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Comment Written 21-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Sharon, for giving this a look. Bill
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Thank you, Sharon, for giving this a look. Bill