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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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It was the clowns fault!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 17-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (Ronald was found in a Mc Manure pile)
Comment from Gloria ....
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CUT AND PASTE

Bill, I find this wee poem poem very well written. Your creativity is outdone only by your terrific penmanship and of course zany sense of humour. :))

Thanks for the share.

Gloria

 Comment Written 16-May-2020


reply by the author on 16-May-2020
    Thank you, Gloria, for the nod to my penmanship. : )
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Interesting horse poem about being bucked off going hunting I guess. Thanks for sharing your creativity in this animal series. Keep sharing your humor. Bill

 Comment Written 14-May-2020


reply by the author on 14-May-2020
    Thanks for following, Bill
Comment from Ulla
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Hahahaha, I loved it. I came late to this, but as I've reviewed the two prior ones I certainly wanted to comment on this one. So horse ran away and Ronald sot dead. What are you like! All best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
    Thanks, Ulla.
Comment from frogbook
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That is an absolutely frightening picture. I am definitely on Chet's side but sorry to hear he disappeared also. Lol. Great effort you have here, Bill. Much enjoyed.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
    Thanks, FB
Comment from nomi338
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I don't blame Chet at all. Who the heck wants some clown riding on their back? Back off Ronald McDonald! Get off my back, you hamburger hack! No, no, no, you can't ride me another day. Read my lips, no free rides!
Thanks I feel better now.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
    Only Chet knows what happened to Ronny Mac.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hi Bill Schott what in the world does Ronald the Clown think he is the Lone Ranger no wonder the horse(chet) wanted to Buck Ronald off
Good humor

Gert

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
    Thanks, Gert.
Comment from damommy
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Hahahaha. Oh, stop! I'm laughing too hard.

I don't blame Chet. Ronald looks ridiculous on the horse. Hopefully, Chet will come home soon. LOL


 Comment Written 21-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
    Thanks, da. Wonder where Ronald went?
reply by damommy on 21-Jun-2017
    Who cares? LOL
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned. Looks like Ronald is changing from clown to cowboy! lol Very good wording and great imagery. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
    Thanks, Teri, for the neat review. Bill
Comment from sharonlshelley
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like this good sense of honour, loved the choice of picture, really enjoyed reading this, i am just getting the hang of the syllable poetry thanks for sharing

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 Comment Written 21-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
    Thank you, Sharon, for giving this a look. Bill
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
    Thank you, Sharon, for giving this a look. Bill