Comment from JudyE

Excellent

When I was young, a palomino was a rare sight but it seems almost all breeds can have palomino colouring nowadays. I'm not keen on the wishy-washy ones.

 Comment Written 17-May-2020

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reply by the author on 17-May-2020

Definitely need some sun.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Well at least the Palominos have room!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 17-May-2020

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reply by the author on 17-May-2020

Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (Sound familiar?)

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-I should give you 10 stars
for this one, Bill, for using my name.
-That was very thoughtful.
-A nice continuation of Efrem's story.
-Good use of dialogue, too.

 Comment Written 17-May-2020

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reply by the author on 17-May-2020

Thank you, Pam. Appreciate the v-stars.

reply by Pam (respa) on 17-May-2020

You are welcome, Bill:)

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

I think I would see a Zebra named Efrem as very cool too.

Let the tattoos begin. Hearts and skulls it is then.

Great job, Bill. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 16-May-2020

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reply by the author on 16-May-2020

Thank you, Gloria

Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

Great job, Bill, with this addition to the zebra tattoo series. You've got a great idea going there. Make it some more. I'll have to check out some others. Bill

 Comment Written 14-May-2020

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reply by the author on 14-May-2020

Thank you again, Bill

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Bill,

Well, I think I'd rather hang with these guys. NOT that I like tattoos. But at least they have imagination. Right?

I'm thinking they may get bored when Efrem shows up, though...???

But, don't worry. I won't tell.

 Comment Written 14-May-2020

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reply by the author on 14-May-2020

Efrem is a boy of summer. The fillies dig him.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Dangerous influences, causing someone who is beautifully pure and clean to dirty up their image with ink that is not only unnecessary, but will change their image, maybe forever. I can see no wisdom there at all.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017

First it was pony tails now this.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Oh, no! How cute.

I wonder that they don't get stripes since they think Efram's "dangerous cool."

How many more of these can you do? It would be interesting to see.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

To each her own. I think Samantha has a tongue piercing.

reply by damommy on 20-Jun-2017

Hahahahaha

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hahahahaha, Bill, what a wonderful continuation to no 1. A pranka it is indeed and seriously good. Look at those two Palominos. Aren't they adorable? Sorry get carried away. Have had so many horses in my life. A serious rider I was. I love your poems. These two poem of yours are hilarious. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Thank you, Ulla, for the neat review. Bill

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

Hello friend I really enjoyed reading this poem I think that it is cleverly written and very cute I love the picture that complements this nicely thank you very much for sharing this and God bless you

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 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Thanks, lalajovanoski, for the excellent review. Bill