Glorious Food
Rictameter poem3 total reviews
Comment from donforclearn
This poem is well written. The images of the ants and food crumbs are excellent. It brings back memories of picnics. Good Luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
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This poem is well written. The images of the ants and food crumbs are excellent. It brings back memories of picnics. Good Luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
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Thank you
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
haha what a fun poem. Good job on the syllable counts
per lie. The image is perfect, too.
line 7 that [ have ] been left behind and with
I would put the -- dash in front of the word sunrise in the last line like this --sunrise per lines. The image is perfect, too.
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
crumbs that [ have ] been left behind
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
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haha what a fun poem. Good job on the syllable counts
per lie. The image is perfect, too.
line 7 that [ have ] been left behind and with
I would put the -- dash in front of the word sunrise in the last line like this --sunrise per lines. The image is perfect, too.
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
crumbs that [ have ] been left behind
Comment Written 11-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
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Thank you
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
After reading, I find that 'Glorious Food' is a good poem that meets the requirements of the contest. Therefore, it makes a good entry.
The artwork shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the image and color of font chosen.
--This reminds me of the other day when my baby dropped a piece of her rice krispy treat on the floor. Ants were on it before I even noticed. It's hot and after it rains, they come out even more.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Rictameter.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
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After reading, I find that 'Glorious Food' is a good poem that meets the requirements of the contest. Therefore, it makes a good entry.
The artwork shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the image and color of font chosen.
--This reminds me of the other day when my baby dropped a piece of her rice krispy treat on the floor. Ants were on it before I even noticed. It's hot and after it rains, they come out even more.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Rictameter.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 11-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
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Thank you
